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Multiple parts unsourced. Like "Croatia, Bolivia and Chile" section, "Greece" section etc.
The citations aren't properly formatted. Citations [45], [46], [47] etc. are simply links.
It has other MoS issues. Things in lead must be incorporated into the body also etc. ("He is the first leader from Rashtriya Swayamsevak Sangh to occupy the office of President of India." - I couldn;t find this in the body)
There are grammatical issues too. It misses multiple articles and determiners etc.
Excess number of images. Looks like photo gallery.
It just lists the speeches and visits by president. No other proper details like actions taken, orders etc.
When these issues are addressed, the article can be
renominated. If you feel that this review is in error, feel free to have it
reassessed. Also I would suggest to have this article copyedited at
WP:GOCE. Thank you for your work so far. Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe 14:38, 24 March 2021 (UTC)reply
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Multiple parts unsourced. Like "Croatia, Bolivia and Chile" section, "Greece" section etc.
The citations aren't properly formatted. Citations [45], [46], [47] etc. are simply links.
It has other MoS issues. Things in lead must be incorporated into the body also etc. ("He is the first leader from Rashtriya Swayamsevak Sangh to occupy the office of President of India." - I couldn;t find this in the body)
There are grammatical issues too. It misses multiple articles and determiners etc.
Excess number of images. Looks like photo gallery.
It just lists the speeches and visits by president. No other proper details like actions taken, orders etc.
When these issues are addressed, the article can be
renominated. If you feel that this review is in error, feel free to have it
reassessed. Also I would suggest to have this article copyedited at
WP:GOCE. Thank you for your work so far. Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe 14:38, 24 March 2021 (UTC)reply