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Reviewer: Vami IV ( talk · contribs) 12:12, 5 April 2020 (UTC)
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Anti-regime forces included Slovak Army defectors, Agrarians, Communists, and Jews.Are there wikilinks that can be made with the presently unlinked text highlighted here?
Altogether 69,000 of the 89,000 Jews in the Slovak State were murdered.Would read better as "were murdered in the Slovak State".
but confiscated movable property (such as furniture) which had been confiscated and sold to non-Jewish buyers.Delete "confiscated and", it is redundant.
(In defense of such activities, SRP chairman Vojtech Winterstein said: "Jews have to make a living. They have no money, no opportunity to make money...")[19]Footnote this. It's the only not-footnote in the article.
Jews were also criticized for accepting help from American Jewish Joint Distribution CommitteeMissing a "the".
Another source of antisemitism, and trigger for violencea trigger
was false rumors and antisemitic conspiracy theories,were
Unlike non-Jewish Germans and Hungarians, the majority of Jews in Slovakia who had German or Hungarian as their mother tongue were not expelled from the country and retained their Czechoslovak citizenship.This is a good candidate for a footnote. Elsewise, insert a link to the Expulsion of Germans from Czechoslovakia.
Captain PalšaWho?
a man, identified in a police report as Captain Palša,b uidh e 18:53, 9 April 2020 (UTC)
the local District CommitteeThe what?
When the SRP came to investigateDitto
incidents on UPA insteadthe UPA
passage of Restitution Act 128/1946,Ditto
Aryanized property and businesses to its original owners.businesses to their original owners
Slovak historian Michal Šmigeľ suggests thatYou can reduce Mr. Šmigeľ's name to just "Šmigeľ" now, he's been introduced now.
chapter of Union of Slovak PartisansYou know the drill
formed a group of several partisans in order to fight the Jewish residents in the areaIs "fight" the right word to use here? It makes it sound like the Jewish residents were forming gangs of their own.
police detained only a few people as a result of the attacks in Bratislava and elsewhere.Suggest shortening to just "the attacks".
Czechoslovak media either denied the riots occurred or that partisans had been involved in violence against Jews.Is this supposed to be only partisans?
The police made up a list of politically unreliable"Suspects" or "person of interest" would be better here.
The mayor of Topoľčany apologized for the rioting a year later.Did the sitting mayor in 2005 apologize or did the guy who was mayor in 1945 apologize in 2005?
Czech historian Jan Láníček states that situation in SlovakiaAnother one
Women were prominent agitators in many of the anti-Jewish demonstrators
HSĽSI assume this is the ruling party in the Slovak State. Should be full-form and linked if so.
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Improved to Good Article status by Buidhe ( talk). Self-nominated at 16:36, 11 April 2020 (UTC).
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QPQ: Done. |
I would like to propose an additional sentence at the end of the section.
Authors of the book 'Vampír z Biesčad v Uličskej doline' (published in 2019) identify perpetrators of Kolbasov massacre as members of UPA.
Footnote to this sentence: Bocan, Tokarczuk 2019
Source: Bocan, Jan and Tokarczuk, Wiesław (2019). "Vampír z Biesčad v Uličskej doline " (in Slovakian). Snina: Edicia Retrospektiva. ISBN: 978-80-972793-8-7 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Rytokarczuk ( talk • contribs) 20:40, 23 June 2020 (UTC)
![]() | Postwar anti-Jewish violence in Slovakia has been listed as one of the
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Reviewer: Vami IV ( talk · contribs) 12:12, 5 April 2020 (UTC)
In reviews I conduct, I may make small copyedits. These will only be limited to spelling and punctuation (removal of double spaces and such). I will only make substantive edits that change the flow and structure of the prose if I previously suggested and it is necessary. For replying to Reviewer comment, please use Done,
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Removed, followed by any comment you'd like to make. I will be crossing out my comments as they are redressed, and only mine. A detailed, section-by-section review will follow. –
♠Vami
_IV†♠
12:12, 5 April 2020 (UTC)
Anti-regime forces included Slovak Army defectors, Agrarians, Communists, and Jews.Are there wikilinks that can be made with the presently unlinked text highlighted here?
Altogether 69,000 of the 89,000 Jews in the Slovak State were murdered.Would read better as "were murdered in the Slovak State".
but confiscated movable property (such as furniture) which had been confiscated and sold to non-Jewish buyers.Delete "confiscated and", it is redundant.
(In defense of such activities, SRP chairman Vojtech Winterstein said: "Jews have to make a living. They have no money, no opportunity to make money...")[19]Footnote this. It's the only not-footnote in the article.
Jews were also criticized for accepting help from American Jewish Joint Distribution CommitteeMissing a "the".
Another source of antisemitism, and trigger for violencea trigger
was false rumors and antisemitic conspiracy theories,were
Unlike non-Jewish Germans and Hungarians, the majority of Jews in Slovakia who had German or Hungarian as their mother tongue were not expelled from the country and retained their Czechoslovak citizenship.This is a good candidate for a footnote. Elsewise, insert a link to the Expulsion of Germans from Czechoslovakia.
Captain PalšaWho?
a man, identified in a police report as Captain Palša,b uidh e 18:53, 9 April 2020 (UTC)
the local District CommitteeThe what?
When the SRP came to investigateDitto
incidents on UPA insteadthe UPA
passage of Restitution Act 128/1946,Ditto
Aryanized property and businesses to its original owners.businesses to their original owners
Slovak historian Michal Šmigeľ suggests thatYou can reduce Mr. Šmigeľ's name to just "Šmigeľ" now, he's been introduced now.
chapter of Union of Slovak PartisansYou know the drill
formed a group of several partisans in order to fight the Jewish residents in the areaIs "fight" the right word to use here? It makes it sound like the Jewish residents were forming gangs of their own.
police detained only a few people as a result of the attacks in Bratislava and elsewhere.Suggest shortening to just "the attacks".
Czechoslovak media either denied the riots occurred or that partisans had been involved in violence against Jews.Is this supposed to be only partisans?
The police made up a list of politically unreliable"Suspects" or "person of interest" would be better here.
The mayor of Topoľčany apologized for the rioting a year later.Did the sitting mayor in 2005 apologize or did the guy who was mayor in 1945 apologize in 2005?
Czech historian Jan Láníček states that situation in SlovakiaAnother one
Women were prominent agitators in many of the anti-Jewish demonstrators
HSĽSI assume this is the ruling party in the Slovak State. Should be full-form and linked if so.
Good Article review progress box
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The result was: promoted by
Yoninah (
talk)
13:22, 19 May 2020 (UTC)
Improved to Good Article status by Buidhe ( talk). Self-nominated at 16:36, 11 April 2020 (UTC).
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems |
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Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation |
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QPQ: Done. |
I would like to propose an additional sentence at the end of the section.
Authors of the book 'Vampír z Biesčad v Uličskej doline' (published in 2019) identify perpetrators of Kolbasov massacre as members of UPA.
Footnote to this sentence: Bocan, Tokarczuk 2019
Source: Bocan, Jan and Tokarczuk, Wiesław (2019). "Vampír z Biesčad v Uličskej doline " (in Slovakian). Snina: Edicia Retrospektiva. ISBN: 978-80-972793-8-7 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Rytokarczuk ( talk • contribs) 20:40, 23 June 2020 (UTC)