"An official English translation of Policenauts was announced for release on the Sega Saturn in 1996 in North America.[22][3][23][24]" - Same as above.
The whole retrospective section needs rewriting to contain fewer direct quotes. One nearly every sentence is too much. Also possibly a little rewrite for conciseness would be good, since at the moment it feels very long-winded.
Ref 12 is Suruga-ya, a web store, which I don't believe is long-term reliable.
This Famitsu article also has the date, and I'd trust that as a source more than Suruga-ya.
Ref 33 needs an alternate source, or properly archiving, as the older review pages on Famitsu have broken text. It's only used for the score, so it's less of an issue.
SegaRetro includes scans, if it helps magazine issue and such holding the review for the SS version.
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TarkusAB:Sorry for bothering you but since you're the one who did most of the work and i'm trying to get this to a GA status (seeing that PatTheMoron is busy with other stuff here in Wikipedia), what can you see that needs to be changed or removed from the article's retrospective section in order to finally get this at the GA level? Any recommendations?
Roberth Martinez (
talk)
23:27, 1 July 2021 (UTC)reply
There's no rush. Let's give Pat a week or so to respond. After all, they did not consult with me before nominating the article, so I presume they intend to do any necessary improvements themselves.
TarkusABtalk/
contrib05:02, 2 July 2021 (UTC)reply
Hi @
TarkusAB: and @
ProtoDrake:! Sorry for being out of touch for a while, but thank you so much for what you've done here. I've made some grammatical changes and reductions to the reception section - is that what you were thinking would improve it?
PatTheMoron (
talk)
13:55, 2 July 2021 (UTC)reply
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PatTheMoron:What ProtoDrake means is that the retrospective section in the reception area of the article needs rewriting to contain fewer direct quotes. That's all what's needed to get this nomination done.
Roberth Martinez (
talk)
16:28, 2 July 2021 (UTC)reply
"An official English translation of Policenauts was announced for release on the Sega Saturn in 1996 in North America.[22][3][23][24]" - Same as above.
The whole retrospective section needs rewriting to contain fewer direct quotes. One nearly every sentence is too much. Also possibly a little rewrite for conciseness would be good, since at the moment it feels very long-winded.
Ref 12 is Suruga-ya, a web store, which I don't believe is long-term reliable.
This Famitsu article also has the date, and I'd trust that as a source more than Suruga-ya.
Ref 33 needs an alternate source, or properly archiving, as the older review pages on Famitsu have broken text. It's only used for the score, so it's less of an issue.
SegaRetro includes scans, if it helps magazine issue and such holding the review for the SS version.
@
TarkusAB:Sorry for bothering you but since you're the one who did most of the work and i'm trying to get this to a GA status (seeing that PatTheMoron is busy with other stuff here in Wikipedia), what can you see that needs to be changed or removed from the article's retrospective section in order to finally get this at the GA level? Any recommendations?
Roberth Martinez (
talk)
23:27, 1 July 2021 (UTC)reply
There's no rush. Let's give Pat a week or so to respond. After all, they did not consult with me before nominating the article, so I presume they intend to do any necessary improvements themselves.
TarkusABtalk/
contrib05:02, 2 July 2021 (UTC)reply
Hi @
TarkusAB: and @
ProtoDrake:! Sorry for being out of touch for a while, but thank you so much for what you've done here. I've made some grammatical changes and reductions to the reception section - is that what you were thinking would improve it?
PatTheMoron (
talk)
13:55, 2 July 2021 (UTC)reply
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PatTheMoron:What ProtoDrake means is that the retrospective section in the reception area of the article needs rewriting to contain fewer direct quotes. That's all what's needed to get this nomination done.
Roberth Martinez (
talk)
16:28, 2 July 2021 (UTC)reply