1) There were numerous punctuation errors throughout. For example, 'After dubbing it a weaker version of "Toxic" he said "And that...' requires two commas here. There are many more. I have fixed all of these but I do suggest that editors working on this to take a closer look at punctuation for future GANs.
2) Online websites should not be in single quotes. They are not styled at all (i.e. no italics, etc.). See
One Time (song) as an example. Also, there is inconsistency here. Sometimes they are in single quote marks and sometimes they are italicized, e.g. Digital Spy. Please make them all consistent and unformatted.
Thanks for doing all the fixes. I'm confident that the article now meets all the requirements for a GA, and am happy to pass it. – SMasters (
talk)
09:42, 19 March 2011 (UTC)reply
1) There were numerous punctuation errors throughout. For example, 'After dubbing it a weaker version of "Toxic" he said "And that...' requires two commas here. There are many more. I have fixed all of these but I do suggest that editors working on this to take a closer look at punctuation for future GANs.
2) Online websites should not be in single quotes. They are not styled at all (i.e. no italics, etc.). See
One Time (song) as an example. Also, there is inconsistency here. Sometimes they are in single quote marks and sometimes they are italicized, e.g. Digital Spy. Please make them all consistent and unformatted.
Thanks for doing all the fixes. I'm confident that the article now meets all the requirements for a GA, and am happy to pass it. – SMasters (
talk)
09:42, 19 March 2011 (UTC)reply