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Poor lead

The lead section to this article is awful. It doesn't explain what plant or plant model refer to. Are we talking about cacti, for example? 70.250.190.30 ( talk) 01:21, 3 October 2010 (UTC) reply

I fully agree and tried to improve this article a bit. It's still far from good, though. I think the topic PLM is important, but the definition here needs a lot more work. Maybe a good start would be for a native speaker (I'm not one) to get rid of the awkward phrasing in this article? This person must not necessarily be an expert on PLM systems - there already is some valid information in this article to work with. 194.138.39.55 ( talk) 12:14, 22 February 2011 (UTC) reply
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Poor lead

The lead section to this article is awful. It doesn't explain what plant or plant model refer to. Are we talking about cacti, for example? 70.250.190.30 ( talk) 01:21, 3 October 2010 (UTC) reply

I fully agree and tried to improve this article a bit. It's still far from good, though. I think the topic PLM is important, but the definition here needs a lot more work. Maybe a good start would be for a native speaker (I'm not one) to get rid of the awkward phrasing in this article? This person must not necessarily be an expert on PLM systems - there already is some valid information in this article to work with. 194.138.39.55 ( talk) 12:14, 22 February 2011 (UTC) reply

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