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Reviewer: Sammi Brie ( talk · contribs) 05:39, 31 July 2022 (UTC)
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InfiniteNexus: Almost there. A handful of copy changes as well as some accessibility items with the table of color options. 7-day hold. Ping me when done. (Disclosure: I have a 6 Pro.)
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in as early as 2016— remove "in"
I have randomly selected 10 citations for spot checks. All pass:
This is one of the longest infoboxes I have seen in quite some time. Some of this is because of the listing of two sets of specs. However, I would like to recommend that someone consider what is truly needed in {{ Infobox mobile phone}}, with these specific comments:
I speak from experience with the 2020 redesign of Infobox radio station, Infobox television station, and Infobox television channel.
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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InfiniteNexus: Almost there. A handful of copy changes as well as some accessibility items with the table of color options. 7-day hold. Ping me when done. (Disclosure: I have a 6 Pro.)
Sammi Brie (she/her •
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06:11, 31 July 2022 (UTC)
in as early as 2016— remove "in"
I have randomly selected 10 citations for spot checks. All pass:
This is one of the longest infoboxes I have seen in quite some time. Some of this is because of the listing of two sets of specs. However, I would like to recommend that someone consider what is truly needed in {{ Infobox mobile phone}}, with these specific comments:
I speak from experience with the 2020 redesign of Infobox radio station, Infobox television station, and Infobox television channel.