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Reviewer: Lordtobi ( talk · contribs) 10:08, 11 January 2020 (UTC)
It is a long way from meeting any one of the six good article criteria
It contains copyright violations( Earwig's says copyvio has a probability of 58.8% because Google Play is using the lede from your article. )
It has, or needs, cleanup banners that are unquestionably still valid
It is not stable due to edit warring on the page
They recruited a cellist, violinist, and classical choir for the production.– Does 'they' in this case refer to the group or the recording studio?
Most of the songs were written and composed by vocalist Einar Solberg.– Given the preceding sentence, it is not immediately clear that this is the group's vocalist, not any vocalist they hired.
Pitfalls charted higher than Malina (2017)– Consider mentioning that Malina was the previous album by Leprous.
... at Ghostward Studios in Stockholm, Sweden with ...– Add a trailing comma after 'Sweden'.
Thirteen were ultimately made, but only nine could be completed due to time constraints.– I suppose this should say "Thirteen songs". I would also clarify how far 'made' goes here, i.e. they began recording but could not do all recordings in time.
He saw Pitfalls as the largest production and musical departure yet ...– Clarify here that it was the largest production for Leprous, not overall.
"I Lose Hope" was frowned upon in its infancy, but reached new potential in studio ...– This should probably say "in the studio".
... at which point drummer Baard Kolstad and Børven applied– Consider swapping the names for a better flow.
A classical choir in Belgrade, Serbia was booked} – A trailing comma here also.
... as a limited mediabook CD with two bonus tracks, jewelcase CD, 2LP vinyl record ...– I would clarify both "CD"
Prog, PopMatters, Sputnikmusic, Ultimate Guitar, and drummer Mike Portnoy included ...– If Portnoy is mentioned to be a drummer, the other four entities should be classified as magazines to avoid ambiguity.
"Observe the Train" was viewed as a calming interval ...– Make sure that the reader is still aware that this is Araneda's opinion.
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Reviewer: Lordtobi ( talk · contribs) 10:08, 11 January 2020 (UTC)
It is a long way from meeting any one of the six good article criteria
It contains copyright violations( Earwig's says copyvio has a probability of 58.8% because Google Play is using the lede from your article. )
It has, or needs, cleanup banners that are unquestionably still valid
It is not stable due to edit warring on the page
They recruited a cellist, violinist, and classical choir for the production.– Does 'they' in this case refer to the group or the recording studio?
Most of the songs were written and composed by vocalist Einar Solberg.– Given the preceding sentence, it is not immediately clear that this is the group's vocalist, not any vocalist they hired.
Pitfalls charted higher than Malina (2017)– Consider mentioning that Malina was the previous album by Leprous.
... at Ghostward Studios in Stockholm, Sweden with ...– Add a trailing comma after 'Sweden'.
Thirteen were ultimately made, but only nine could be completed due to time constraints.– I suppose this should say "Thirteen songs". I would also clarify how far 'made' goes here, i.e. they began recording but could not do all recordings in time.
He saw Pitfalls as the largest production and musical departure yet ...– Clarify here that it was the largest production for Leprous, not overall.
"I Lose Hope" was frowned upon in its infancy, but reached new potential in studio ...– This should probably say "in the studio".
... at which point drummer Baard Kolstad and Børven applied– Consider swapping the names for a better flow.
A classical choir in Belgrade, Serbia was booked} – A trailing comma here also.
... as a limited mediabook CD with two bonus tracks, jewelcase CD, 2LP vinyl record ...– I would clarify both "CD"
Prog, PopMatters, Sputnikmusic, Ultimate Guitar, and drummer Mike Portnoy included ...– If Portnoy is mentioned to be a drummer, the other four entities should be classified as magazines to avoid ambiguity.
"Observe the Train" was viewed as a calming interval ...– Make sure that the reader is still aware that this is Araneda's opinion.
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