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This section contains in a single paragraph various tidbits of information, which have (apparently) no connection to each other, and sometimes no connection to the plot in the previous section. The information should at least be split into several paragraphs; for several of these "trivia" tidbits it is not clear (to me) why they should appear in this article. Context would be helpful.
There are many more points. For example, when I read that "The final dialogue scene featuring Kara and James was shortened", I get essentially no information. I would expect that scenes are often shortened in the editing process.
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This section contains in a single paragraph various tidbits of information, which have (apparently) no connection to each other, and sometimes no connection to the plot in the previous section. The information should at least be split into several paragraphs; for several of these "trivia" tidbits it is not clear (to me) why they should appear in this article. Context would be helpful.
There are many more points. For example, when I read that "The final dialogue scene featuring Kara and James was shortened", I get essentially no information. I would expect that scenes are often shortened in the editing process.