The lede is excellent. I think
country music should be changed to
country in the 'Composition' section. I really don't understand the sentence 'Swift's boasts with big vocals that span two octaves, from G3 to C5'.
Thanks for the review. I have made a few changes and since Ipodnano's busy in real life, I'd be happy to address the remaining issues, if there are any.
Novice7 (
talk)
11:52, 14 October 2011 (UTC)reply
The lede is excellent. I think
country music should be changed to
country in the 'Composition' section. I really don't understand the sentence 'Swift's boasts with big vocals that span two octaves, from G3 to C5'.
Thanks for the review. I have made a few changes and since Ipodnano's busy in real life, I'd be happy to address the remaining issues, if there are any.
Novice7 (
talk)
11:52, 14 October 2011 (UTC)reply