Sorry for the late reply, but please extend the time before failing the article. it's been sometime before someone takes it up to review it, but it seems my schedule is stretched. Can you please extend it maybe for just another week please...
Bulls123 (
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05:58, 7 September 2015 (UTC)reply
This passed?! I can see tense issues ("also have their own groups of guerrillas fighting the Japanese invaders", "also occurred much in Leyte before the arrival of..." and clumsy grammar ("The Japanese were vigilant of the resistance", " guerrilla units, of which Ramon Magsaysay was included", "benefited from the bill but only the Philippines were not allowed to be granted by such..") and typos ( "the safety and aide of the civilians ") sufficient to doubt that it was properly read through.
GraemeLeggett (
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12:42, 13 September 2015 (UTC)reply
To be honest, it seems every time I read a bit I spot something. The answer is to pick a section and read it and move on once you are sure it does say what you think it says, and that a naïve reader would also understand it that way.
GraemeLeggett (
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20:13, 13 September 2015 (UTC)reply
Sorry for the late reply, but please extend the time before failing the article. it's been sometime before someone takes it up to review it, but it seems my schedule is stretched. Can you please extend it maybe for just another week please...
Bulls123 (
talk)
05:58, 7 September 2015 (UTC)reply
This passed?! I can see tense issues ("also have their own groups of guerrillas fighting the Japanese invaders", "also occurred much in Leyte before the arrival of..." and clumsy grammar ("The Japanese were vigilant of the resistance", " guerrilla units, of which Ramon Magsaysay was included", "benefited from the bill but only the Philippines were not allowed to be granted by such..") and typos ( "the safety and aide of the civilians ") sufficient to doubt that it was properly read through.
GraemeLeggett (
talk)
12:42, 13 September 2015 (UTC)reply
To be honest, it seems every time I read a bit I spot something. The answer is to pick a section and read it and move on once you are sure it does say what you think it says, and that a naïve reader would also understand it that way.
GraemeLeggett (
talk)
20:13, 13 September 2015 (UTC)reply