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1. http://uhaweb.hartford.edu/BUGL/immune.htm
2. http://nobelprize.org/educational_games/medicine/immunity/immune-detail.html
3. http://www.immunecentral.com/immune-system/iss10.cfm
4. http://www.dent.ucla.edu/pic/members/neutrophils/neutrophils.html
5. http://textbookofbacteriology.net/antiphago.html
6. http://www.medfriendly.com/neutrophil.html
7. http://www.funsci.com/fun3_en/blood/blood.htm#5
8. http://www.emc.maricopa.edu/faculty/farabee/BIOBK/BioBookIMMUN.html
9. http://www.teaching.anhb.uwa.edu.au/mb140/CorePages/Connective/Connect.htm#labreticular
10. http://www.sciencemag.org/cgi/content/abstract/233/4760/215
11. http://www.pubmedcentral.nih.gov/articlerender.fcgi?artid=1453512
12. http://bme.virginia.edu/ley/leukocytes.htm
13. http://web2.airmail.net/uthman/blood_cells.html
14. http://www.ultranet.com/~jkimball/BiologyPages/B/Blood.html
15. http://users.rcn.com/jkimball.ma.ultranet/BiologyPages/D/DCs.html
16. http://www-micro.msb.le.ac.uk/MBChB/2a.html
17. http://www.csa.com/discoveryguides/cancer/review.php
18. Phagocytosis; University of Trieste publishes research in phagocytosis; Immunotherapy Weekly 10-17-2007 —Preceding unsigned comment added by Eulemur2008 ( talk • contribs) 14:09, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
19. http://www.rockefeller.edu/labheads/steinman/steinman-lab.php —Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.77.214.68 ( talk) 21:43, 19 October 2008 (UTC)
20. http://www.healthsystem.virginia.edu/internet/hematology/HessEDD/BenignHematologicDisorders/normal-hematopoietic-cells/Dendritic-cell.cfm —Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.77.214.68 ( talk) 21:46, 19 October 2008 (UTC)
21. http://www.ehponline.org/members/1994/Suppl-10/allen-full.html —Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.77.214.68 ( talk) 21:55, 19 October 2008 (UTC)
22. http://bloodjournal.hematologylibrary.org/cgi/content/full/112/4/935
1. http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/18607538?ordinalpos=5&itool=EntrezSystem2.PEntrez.Pubmed.Pubmed_ResultsPanel.Pubmed_DefaultReportPanel.Pubmed_RVDocSum —Preceding unsigned comment added by Eulemur2008 ( talk • contribs) 17:22, 26 November 2008 (UTC)
3. http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/18573331?ordinalpos=7&itool=EntrezSystem2.PEntrez.Pubmed.Pubmed_ResultsPanel.Pubmed_DefaultReportPanel.Pubmed_RVDocSum —Preceding unsigned comment added by Eulemur2008 ( talk • contribs) 17:41, 26 November 2008 (UTC)
4. http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/books/bv.fcgi?rid=eurekah.chapter.19451
5. http://textbookofbacteriology.net/antiphago.html
1. http://nobelprize.org/nobel_prizes/medicine/laureates/1908/mechnikov-bio.html
2. http://nobelprize.org/educational_games/medicine/immunity/immune-pioneers.html
3. http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/18463079
16603587, 12527227, 18546145, 7762448
18511861, 14676270, 9022278, 9159214, 18574584, 9022278, 18449540, 17237347, 17050190, 18036868, 17956288, 17278388
10519157, 3055215
9355122
As a member of WP:MED, I am promoting this article to B-class; well done. Graham Colm Talk 22:36, 4 December 2008 (UTC)
Comments Merging these article makes sense. Most of the information in Phagocytosis is covered in Phagocyte and Phagocyte is currently being actively edited and is a Good Article nominee. Graham Colm Talk 20:51, 30 December 2008 (UTC)
Congratulations to everyone who has worked on getting this article to GA, I've decided to pass it as I found only a few minor issues which I've fixed myself during the course of my review, which can be found here. I suggest someone goes through the article and continues linking to other articles as much as possible, especially in regards to complicated scientific terminology or names of compounds.
Kind regards,
— Cyclonenim ( talk · contribs · email) 00:08, 4 January 2009 (UTC)
I will be adding this to the cell type section as soon as I get the chance. Unless there are major objections (if so feel free to add comments below). -- Eulemur2008 ( talk) 00:29, 13 January 2009 (UTC)
More Pubmed Numbers: 11168574 -- Eulemur2008 ( talk) 13:31, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
I am considering changing the heading for cell types to professional phagocytes because there are non-professional phagocytes as well. In addition, is it important to at least mention the non-professional phagocytes? -- Eulemur2008 ( talk) 21:38, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
This section needs to be expanded to three or four short paragraphs that summarize the important points in the article. A rule of thumb, (mine), is that each major heading should have a representative sentence or two in the lead. We could make this article fit for the Main Page with a few more hours of work over the next few months IMHO. Graham Colm Talk 21:58, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
More suggestions
The reference for both tables is Paoletti p. 427
Graham. Graham Colm Talk 20:22, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
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![]() | This is an archive of past discussions. Do not edit the contents of this page. If you wish to start a new discussion or revive an old one, please do so on the current talk page. |
Archive 1 | Archive 2 | Archive 3 |
It's better to use the "New Section" tab, (or the one marked +), at the top of the page, rather than clicking on Edit. This will produce a small box in which you can write the subject of your comments and a larger box for your comments. Unless the subject is the same, in which case click on the Edit at the top of the section and begin your comment with a *
1. http://uhaweb.hartford.edu/BUGL/immune.htm
2. http://nobelprize.org/educational_games/medicine/immunity/immune-detail.html
3. http://www.immunecentral.com/immune-system/iss10.cfm
4. http://www.dent.ucla.edu/pic/members/neutrophils/neutrophils.html
5. http://textbookofbacteriology.net/antiphago.html
6. http://www.medfriendly.com/neutrophil.html
7. http://www.funsci.com/fun3_en/blood/blood.htm#5
8. http://www.emc.maricopa.edu/faculty/farabee/BIOBK/BioBookIMMUN.html
9. http://www.teaching.anhb.uwa.edu.au/mb140/CorePages/Connective/Connect.htm#labreticular
10. http://www.sciencemag.org/cgi/content/abstract/233/4760/215
11. http://www.pubmedcentral.nih.gov/articlerender.fcgi?artid=1453512
12. http://bme.virginia.edu/ley/leukocytes.htm
13. http://web2.airmail.net/uthman/blood_cells.html
14. http://www.ultranet.com/~jkimball/BiologyPages/B/Blood.html
15. http://users.rcn.com/jkimball.ma.ultranet/BiologyPages/D/DCs.html
16. http://www-micro.msb.le.ac.uk/MBChB/2a.html
17. http://www.csa.com/discoveryguides/cancer/review.php
18. Phagocytosis; University of Trieste publishes research in phagocytosis; Immunotherapy Weekly 10-17-2007 —Preceding unsigned comment added by Eulemur2008 ( talk • contribs) 14:09, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
19. http://www.rockefeller.edu/labheads/steinman/steinman-lab.php —Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.77.214.68 ( talk) 21:43, 19 October 2008 (UTC)
20. http://www.healthsystem.virginia.edu/internet/hematology/HessEDD/BenignHematologicDisorders/normal-hematopoietic-cells/Dendritic-cell.cfm —Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.77.214.68 ( talk) 21:46, 19 October 2008 (UTC)
21. http://www.ehponline.org/members/1994/Suppl-10/allen-full.html —Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.77.214.68 ( talk) 21:55, 19 October 2008 (UTC)
22. http://bloodjournal.hematologylibrary.org/cgi/content/full/112/4/935
1. http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/18607538?ordinalpos=5&itool=EntrezSystem2.PEntrez.Pubmed.Pubmed_ResultsPanel.Pubmed_DefaultReportPanel.Pubmed_RVDocSum —Preceding unsigned comment added by Eulemur2008 ( talk • contribs) 17:22, 26 November 2008 (UTC)
3. http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/18573331?ordinalpos=7&itool=EntrezSystem2.PEntrez.Pubmed.Pubmed_ResultsPanel.Pubmed_DefaultReportPanel.Pubmed_RVDocSum —Preceding unsigned comment added by Eulemur2008 ( talk • contribs) 17:41, 26 November 2008 (UTC)
4. http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/books/bv.fcgi?rid=eurekah.chapter.19451
5. http://textbookofbacteriology.net/antiphago.html
1. http://nobelprize.org/nobel_prizes/medicine/laureates/1908/mechnikov-bio.html
2. http://nobelprize.org/educational_games/medicine/immunity/immune-pioneers.html
3. http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/18463079
16603587, 12527227, 18546145, 7762448
18511861, 14676270, 9022278, 9159214, 18574584, 9022278, 18449540, 17237347, 17050190, 18036868, 17956288, 17278388
10519157, 3055215
9355122
As a member of WP:MED, I am promoting this article to B-class; well done. Graham Colm Talk 22:36, 4 December 2008 (UTC)
Comments Merging these article makes sense. Most of the information in Phagocytosis is covered in Phagocyte and Phagocyte is currently being actively edited and is a Good Article nominee. Graham Colm Talk 20:51, 30 December 2008 (UTC)
Congratulations to everyone who has worked on getting this article to GA, I've decided to pass it as I found only a few minor issues which I've fixed myself during the course of my review, which can be found here. I suggest someone goes through the article and continues linking to other articles as much as possible, especially in regards to complicated scientific terminology or names of compounds.
Kind regards,
— Cyclonenim ( talk · contribs · email) 00:08, 4 January 2009 (UTC)
I will be adding this to the cell type section as soon as I get the chance. Unless there are major objections (if so feel free to add comments below). -- Eulemur2008 ( talk) 00:29, 13 January 2009 (UTC)
More Pubmed Numbers: 11168574 -- Eulemur2008 ( talk) 13:31, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
I am considering changing the heading for cell types to professional phagocytes because there are non-professional phagocytes as well. In addition, is it important to at least mention the non-professional phagocytes? -- Eulemur2008 ( talk) 21:38, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
This section needs to be expanded to three or four short paragraphs that summarize the important points in the article. A rule of thumb, (mine), is that each major heading should have a representative sentence or two in the lead. We could make this article fit for the Main Page with a few more hours of work over the next few months IMHO. Graham Colm Talk 21:58, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
More suggestions
The reference for both tables is Paoletti p. 427
Graham. Graham Colm Talk 20:22, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
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