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July 8, 2012. The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that the biggest aircraft ever to be flown under the
Sydney Harbour Bridge was a
Lancaster bomber piloted by
Flight Lieutenant
Peter Isaacson in 1943? | ||||||||||
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Hello,
I note that by all links, Isaacson grew up in the vicinity of Melbourne, but the article does not come right out and state that.
The link to the bombing mission(s) flown against Bremen might be better linked to Bombing of Bremen in World War II.
The Postwar career section of the article is jumbled chronologically. It might be split into professional and personal subsections, or it could be clarified by sorting out the chronology.
Georgejdorner ( talk) 16:17, 29 June 2012 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Canadian Paul ( talk · contribs) 19:56, 8 July 2012 (UTC)
I'll give this one a look as well, hopefully later tonight! Canadian Paul 19:56, 8 July 2012 (UTC)
I went through and did a copyedit, mainly focusing on issues related to WP:NAMES and WP:DATESNO, as well as punctuation usage, while trying to stay away from anything that resembled our national differences in writing styles. Overall, however, this article seems to meet the Good Article status except for some small issues that I had with the lead:
So to allow for these issues to be addressed I am placing the article on hold for a period of up to a week. I'm always open to discussion so if you think I'm wrong on something leave your thoughts here and we'll discuss. I'll try to check this page daily, but it might be a little on and off for the next several days. Either way, I don't anticipate too much of a problem with passing this article. Canadian Paul 04:11, 15 July 2012 (UTC)
Ian Rose; Here's a possible source the IP might have been referring to [1] via Deaths in 2017. Adog104 Talk to me 16:14, 8 April 2017 (UTC)
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Peter Isaacson has been listed as one of the History good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. | ||||||||||
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A
fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's
Main Page in the "
Did you know?" column on
July 8, 2012. The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that the biggest aircraft ever to be flown under the
Sydney Harbour Bridge was a
Lancaster bomber piloted by
Flight Lieutenant
Peter Isaacson in 1943? | ||||||||||
A news item involving this article was featured on Wikipedia's Main Page in the " In the news" column on April 10, 2017. |
This article is rated GA-class on Wikipedia's
content assessment scale. It is of interest to the following WikiProjects: | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Hello,
I note that by all links, Isaacson grew up in the vicinity of Melbourne, but the article does not come right out and state that.
The link to the bombing mission(s) flown against Bremen might be better linked to Bombing of Bremen in World War II.
The Postwar career section of the article is jumbled chronologically. It might be split into professional and personal subsections, or it could be clarified by sorting out the chronology.
Georgejdorner ( talk) 16:17, 29 June 2012 (UTC)
GA toolbox |
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Reviewing |
Reviewer: Canadian Paul ( talk · contribs) 19:56, 8 July 2012 (UTC)
I'll give this one a look as well, hopefully later tonight! Canadian Paul 19:56, 8 July 2012 (UTC)
I went through and did a copyedit, mainly focusing on issues related to WP:NAMES and WP:DATESNO, as well as punctuation usage, while trying to stay away from anything that resembled our national differences in writing styles. Overall, however, this article seems to meet the Good Article status except for some small issues that I had with the lead:
So to allow for these issues to be addressed I am placing the article on hold for a period of up to a week. I'm always open to discussion so if you think I'm wrong on something leave your thoughts here and we'll discuss. I'll try to check this page daily, but it might be a little on and off for the next several days. Either way, I don't anticipate too much of a problem with passing this article. Canadian Paul 04:11, 15 July 2012 (UTC)
Ian Rose; Here's a possible source the IP might have been referring to [1] via Deaths in 2017. Adog104 Talk to me 16:14, 8 April 2017 (UTC)
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