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Reviewer: MWright96 ( talk · contribs) 07:12, 14 May 2018 (UTC)
Going to take up this review. MWright96 (talk) 07:12, 14 May 2018 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and
verifiable.
- a (
reference section):
b (citations to
reliable sources): c (
OR):
- a (
reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (
major aspects): b (
focused):
- a (
major aspects):
- It follows the
neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by
images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have
fair use rationales): b (
appropriate use with
suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have
fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Background
- "and with the exception of the 1952 Helsinki Games has participated" - a comma is needed between "Games" and "has"
Alpine skiing
- "but she failed to finish" - completed to avoid reptition of closely spelt wording
- "finishing the first run in a time of 59 seconds, but failing to finish the second run." - end again to avoid reptition
Cross-country skiing
- "and moving from Peru to Seattle, Washington" - sentence needs a period to complete it
- "he finished with a time of 45 minutes and 53 seconds, finishing in 94th place out of 95 competitors." - placing 94th
References
- Reference 2 should have its publication and access dates should be written as 13 February 2010 and 24 July 2011 in line with the rest of the citations
That is all I found during my read-through. Like the other reviews, not too many issues are present. MWright96 (talk) 08:47, 14 May 2018 (UTC)
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MWright96: thanks for another review, I've fixed all the points raised.
Courcelles (
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10:22, 14 May 2018 (UTC)
- @ Courcelles: Can now promote this entry to GA class. Note: I've made an edit to fix the inconsistency with the date formatting in the references. MWright96 (talk) 11:59, 14 May 2018 (UTC)
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Reviewer: MWright96 ( talk · contribs) 07:12, 14 May 2018 (UTC)
Going to take up this review. MWright96 (talk) 07:12, 14 May 2018 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and
verifiable.
- a (
reference section): b (citations to
reliable sources): c (
OR):
- a (
reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (
major aspects): b (
focused):
- a (
major aspects):
- It follows the
neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by
images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have
fair use rationales): b (
appropriate use with
suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have
fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Background
- "and with the exception of the 1952 Helsinki Games has participated" - a comma is needed between "Games" and "has"
Alpine skiing
- "but she failed to finish" - completed to avoid reptition of closely spelt wording
- "finishing the first run in a time of 59 seconds, but failing to finish the second run." - end again to avoid reptition
Cross-country skiing
- "and moving from Peru to Seattle, Washington" - sentence needs a period to complete it
- "he finished with a time of 45 minutes and 53 seconds, finishing in 94th place out of 95 competitors." - placing 94th
References
- Reference 2 should have its publication and access dates should be written as 13 February 2010 and 24 July 2011 in line with the rest of the citations
That is all I found during my read-through. Like the other reviews, not too many issues are present. MWright96 (talk) 08:47, 14 May 2018 (UTC)
- @
MWright96: thanks for another review, I've fixed all the points raised.
Courcelles (
talk)
10:22, 14 May 2018 (UTC)
- @ Courcelles: Can now promote this entry to GA class. Note: I've made an edit to fix the inconsistency with the date formatting in the references. MWright96 (talk) 11:59, 14 May 2018 (UTC)