"was born May 30, 1836 in Newry, Maine, " - a comma is needed between "1836" and "in"
Done
"and from 1869 to 1871 a" - was a
Done
"Soon after the marriage, the couple moved to Winchester. They lived in a white two-story colonial house on the riverbank near a railroad station in the center of town." - these two sentences might be better merged with each other
Done
"The house included a store outlet. Their store having the city's only public telephone made it a natural congregation point." - same query as above
Done
Career
"and the company expanded and took over all the floors" - to take
Done
"Fifty years old in 1886," - try to avoid starting a sentence with a numerical figure
Done
"She was a California Perfume Company businesswoman and had pioneered the company's" - repetition of "company"
Done
"in a box kit.[15][11][16][17]" - refs in numerical order please
Done
"Albee later offered to her customers a variety of California Perfume Company cosmetics." - Albee later offered a variety of California Perfume Company cosmetics to her customers.
Done
"Albee is considered Avon's" - considered by whom?
Done
Later life and death
"Albee died December 7, 1914" - {[xt|died on December 7}}
Done
"at Templeton, Massachusetts. She was 78 years old." - consider merging this portion of text together
Done
Citations
Reference 2's publisher and publication date is missing
Done
Also, the same reference's access date should be in the month, day and year date format
Done
References 5 and 21 are duplicates; only one is needed
Done
THe formatting of the page number for Reference 33 is incorrect
Done
The formatting of Reference 38 is incomplete
Done
newspapers.com should begin with a capital letter each time
"was born May 30, 1836 in Newry, Maine, " - a comma is needed between "1836" and "in"
Done
"and from 1869 to 1871 a" - was a
Done
"Soon after the marriage, the couple moved to Winchester. They lived in a white two-story colonial house on the riverbank near a railroad station in the center of town." - these two sentences might be better merged with each other
Done
"The house included a store outlet. Their store having the city's only public telephone made it a natural congregation point." - same query as above
Done
Career
"and the company expanded and took over all the floors" - to take
Done
"Fifty years old in 1886," - try to avoid starting a sentence with a numerical figure
Done
"She was a California Perfume Company businesswoman and had pioneered the company's" - repetition of "company"
Done
"in a box kit.[15][11][16][17]" - refs in numerical order please
Done
"Albee later offered to her customers a variety of California Perfume Company cosmetics." - Albee later offered a variety of California Perfume Company cosmetics to her customers.
Done
"Albee is considered Avon's" - considered by whom?
Done
Later life and death
"Albee died December 7, 1914" - {[xt|died on December 7}}
Done
"at Templeton, Massachusetts. She was 78 years old." - consider merging this portion of text together
Done
Citations
Reference 2's publisher and publication date is missing
Done
Also, the same reference's access date should be in the month, day and year date format
Done
References 5 and 21 are duplicates; only one is needed
Done
THe formatting of the page number for Reference 33 is incorrect
Done
The formatting of Reference 38 is incomplete
Done
newspapers.com should begin with a capital letter each time