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Reviewer: Albacore ( talk · contribs) 03:26, 1 April 2012 (UTC) Review: reply

• First, Per Manum (The X-Files) should redirect to this page
  • Done. GRAPPLE X 17:44, 1 April 2012 (UTC) reply

• It was written by Frank Spotnitz and series creator Chris Carter, and directed by Kim Manners. The episode helps to explore the series' overarching mythology. Combine the two sentences; something like: "Written by Frank Spotnitz and series creator Chris Carter, and directed by Kim Manners, the episode helps to explore the series' overarching mythology."
  • Done. GRAPPLE X 17:44, 1 April 2012 (UTC) reply

• Delink the names of the actors in the lead since they're linked in the "plot" section.
  • Done. GRAPPLE X 17:44, 1 April 2012 (UTC) reply

• FBI special agents John Doggett (Robert Patrick) and Dana Scully (Gillian Anderson) meet Duffy Haskell why not mention who plays Haskell?
  • Done.-- Gen. Quon ( talk) 19:58, 1 April 2012 (UTC) reply
• overhearing a pregnant woman, Mrs Hendershot why not mention who plays Hendershot since she seems important to the plot?
  • Done.-- Gen. Quon ( talk) 19:58, 1 April 2012 (UTC) reply
• believing that Rohrer is a CIA agent. you link FBI so why not CIA?
  • Done.-- Gen. Quon ( talk) 19:58, 1 April 2012 (UTC) reply
• Delink Scully from the infobox
  • Done.-- Gen. Quon ( talk) 19:58, 1 April 2012 (UTC) reply
• Duffy Haskel in this episode, would return would return->> returned
  • Done.-- Gen. Quon ( talk) 19:58, 1 April 2012 (UTC) reply
• They are driven away, but Hendershot enters labour. Unclear who "they" are hear: the marines or the group
  • Done. GRAPPLE X 15:40, 2 April 2012 (UTC) reply

• Perhaps link " In vitro fertilisation" , and do italicize "in vitro"
  • Done.-- Gen. Quon ( talk) 19:58, 1 April 2012 (UTC) reply
• In the Broadcast and reception section you have three "the episode"s in a row to begin sentences in the first paragraph; a reword would be nice.
  • Done, see below-- Gen. Quon ( talk) 19:53, 1 April 2012 (UTC) reply
• Ref 12, the date should be formatted as the other dates are
  • Done, these two were my fault...-- Gen. Quon ( talk) 19:53, 1 April 2012 (UTC) reply
• Are there any more reviews you could add or find?
  • I added a (pretty scathing) review from Cinefantastique.-- Gen. Quon ( talk) 01:02, 2 April 2012 (UTC) reply

If you could respond to each comment individually that would be great. I'll re-look the article when these are addressed. Albacore ( talk) 03:26, 1 April 2012 (UTC) reply

Reread and passed. Albacore ( talk) 22:05, 2 April 2012 (UTC) reply