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I took care of the NBI issues but the prose needs some cleanup - some excessive details, some tense issues, etc. For example:
And so on. I was going to take care of it myself, but the issues seem to be more significant. I'm putting this on hold for the standard 7 days, or longer if work is being done. -- Rs chen 7754 22:52, 17 October 2015 (UTC)
There. Mitch32( Scenery is fine — but human nature is finer.) 18:05, 18 October 2015 (UTC)
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I took care of the NBI issues but the prose needs some cleanup - some excessive details, some tense issues, etc. For example:
And so on. I was going to take care of it myself, but the issues seem to be more significant. I'm putting this on hold for the standard 7 days, or longer if work is being done. -- Rs chen 7754 22:52, 17 October 2015 (UTC)
There. Mitch32( Scenery is fine — but human nature is finer.) 18:05, 18 October 2015 (UTC)