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The second and third sentences of the lead quote the second and third sentences of the obituary by
Julia Eccleshare (ref name=Guardian). The source is cited at that point but the material is neither paraphrased nor marked as quotation. I haven't looked further.
The caption of the photograph that heads the obituary is "Patricia Wrightson was accused of exploitation." That pertains to her use of Aboriginal legends: ... "As fashions changed, she later received criticism for doing so." That deserves some coverage here --and also in our book article The Nargun and the Stars, of course.
I have attempted to paraphrase second and third sentences, and have created a new section 'Controversy' to begin to cover the charge of exploitation.
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The second and third sentences of the lead quote the second and third sentences of the obituary by
Julia Eccleshare (ref name=Guardian). The source is cited at that point but the material is neither paraphrased nor marked as quotation. I haven't looked further.
The caption of the photograph that heads the obituary is "Patricia Wrightson was accused of exploitation." That pertains to her use of Aboriginal legends: ... "As fashions changed, she later received criticism for doing so." That deserves some coverage here --and also in our book article The Nargun and the Stars, of course.
I have attempted to paraphrase second and third sentences, and have created a new section 'Controversy' to begin to cover the charge of exploitation.
Spinifex&Sand (
talk) 01:36, 28 February 2022 (UTC)reply