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"across ethnic lines, PADESM championed the empowerment and equitable government of coastal peoples, who had historically been subjugated by the Merina and feared the MDRM could ensure their return to political dominance upon independence. They actively recruited and campaigned along ethnic lines," -avoid repetition of "across/along ethinic lines".
Done
"The party won several key political elections in the 1950s. But a" -can you avoid using "but" here it doesn't read well, perhaps try to merge sentences/rephrase?
Done
Founding
" non-Merina feared would revive Merina political hegemony, the Party for the Disinherited of Madagascar (Parti des déshérités de Madagascar, PADESM) was formed[2] in June 1946 by members of coastal communities formerly subjugated by the Merina empire, as well as highland-based descendents of former Merina " -can we avoid repeating "Merina" so much?
Done (but we still need to have most of them for clarity)
" first president after independence), Albert Sylla (who became Minister of Foreign Affairs under Tsiranana, and whose son, Jacques Sylla, would go on to become Prime Minister of Madagascar" -do we have links to articles on Ministry of Foreign Affairs (Madagscar)?
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Africa on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
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This article is within the scope of WikiProject Politics, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
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"across ethnic lines, PADESM championed the empowerment and equitable government of coastal peoples, who had historically been subjugated by the Merina and feared the MDRM could ensure their return to political dominance upon independence. They actively recruited and campaigned along ethnic lines," -avoid repetition of "across/along ethinic lines".
Done
"The party won several key political elections in the 1950s. But a" -can you avoid using "but" here it doesn't read well, perhaps try to merge sentences/rephrase?
Done
Founding
" non-Merina feared would revive Merina political hegemony, the Party for the Disinherited of Madagascar (Parti des déshérités de Madagascar, PADESM) was formed[2] in June 1946 by members of coastal communities formerly subjugated by the Merina empire, as well as highland-based descendents of former Merina " -can we avoid repeating "Merina" so much?
Done (but we still need to have most of them for clarity)
" first president after independence), Albert Sylla (who became Minister of Foreign Affairs under Tsiranana, and whose son, Jacques Sylla, would go on to become Prime Minister of Madagascar" -do we have links to articles on Ministry of Foreign Affairs (Madagscar)?