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Hello Heba Aisha. After completing my preliminary copyedit I always ask questions about the article to ensure that my edit reflects the intended meaning and is clear in doing so. Please reply to each point by indenting below each one like you would a conversation; items will be struck out once they have been answered. Please ping me with {{ U}}, {{ ping}}, or {{ re}} as I have a lot of items on my watchlist. My copyediting process can be found here. — Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 18:29, 6 April 2021 (UTC) |
The victims belonged to the backward Yadav caste.Link removed, emphasis added. What does backward mean here?
Over the case, the judge booked five police officers for "wrongful confinement" using force and 14 others for mass rape.Already edited. What is meant exactly by book? They were charged, found guilty?
The village was facing the fear of migration after the construction of the Punasi dam. The inhabitants originally could not migrate, and they challenged the proposal to construct the dam firmly in court, but some of the women took part in judicial proceedings.Tag removed. Two things: first, didn't some people believe the rapes to have occurred as retaliation as stated in §Incident (
A few civilians stated that the rapes were in retaliation for the assault of a police constable a few days earlier.)? Second, this seems better off in the previous section if dam construction was the instigating incident.
Looking forward to your answers. — Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 18:29, 6 April 2021 (UTC)
How was this a caste based violence , if the perpetrators were policemen? Please respond, else have to change accordingly. Lord 0f Avernus ( talk) 04:28, 15 April 2022 (UTC)
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Hello Heba Aisha. After completing my preliminary copyedit I always ask questions about the article to ensure that my edit reflects the intended meaning and is clear in doing so. Please reply to each point by indenting below each one like you would a conversation; items will be struck out once they have been answered. Please ping me with {{ U}}, {{ ping}}, or {{ re}} as I have a lot of items on my watchlist. My copyediting process can be found here. — Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 18:29, 6 April 2021 (UTC) |
The victims belonged to the backward Yadav caste.Link removed, emphasis added. What does backward mean here?
Over the case, the judge booked five police officers for "wrongful confinement" using force and 14 others for mass rape.Already edited. What is meant exactly by book? They were charged, found guilty?
The village was facing the fear of migration after the construction of the Punasi dam. The inhabitants originally could not migrate, and they challenged the proposal to construct the dam firmly in court, but some of the women took part in judicial proceedings.Tag removed. Two things: first, didn't some people believe the rapes to have occurred as retaliation as stated in §Incident (
A few civilians stated that the rapes were in retaliation for the assault of a police constable a few days earlier.)? Second, this seems better off in the previous section if dam construction was the instigating incident.
Looking forward to your answers. — Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 18:29, 6 April 2021 (UTC)
How was this a caste based violence , if the perpetrators were policemen? Please respond, else have to change accordingly. Lord 0f Avernus ( talk) 04:28, 15 April 2022 (UTC)