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The biggest problem with this right now is that I can't really tell what these poems are. Are they all about "parallax"? We need an overview of the selection of poems--including a discussion of form, style, etc. And I think you need to rewrite some of it: parts of it didn't really make a lot of sense. Surely those sources tell you more about the content etc. of these poems than what you have in here now. Dr Aaij ( talk) 02:45, 28 June 2019 (UTC)
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The biggest problem with this right now is that I can't really tell what these poems are. Are they all about "parallax"? We need an overview of the selection of poems--including a discussion of form, style, etc. And I think you need to rewrite some of it: parts of it didn't really make a lot of sense. Surely those sources tell you more about the content etc. of these poems than what you have in here now. Dr Aaij ( talk) 02:45, 28 June 2019 (UTC)