"Buzz single" is industry jargon and should be explained. Fixed
Sean Garrett is mentioned twice in the second paragraph. Fixed, I think. He was mentioned twice because the last paragraph deals mostly with composition but techincally it is still background information, so I didn't split it. However I removed his first name from the second mentioning.
This is the sentence I'm referring to (second paragraph): "It was written by Usher, Sean Garrett, Alonzo Mathis, Sean Garrett and Zaytoven, and was produced by the latter two." --
S Masters (
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15:12, 24 April 2010 (UTC)reply
Other than the above, the article has no major issues.
Summary: Thank you for all the fixes. I am confident that the article now meets all the requirements for a Good Article, and I am happy to list it as such. --
S Masters (
talk)
04:28, 25 April 2010 (UTC)reply
"Buzz single" is industry jargon and should be explained. Fixed
Sean Garrett is mentioned twice in the second paragraph. Fixed, I think. He was mentioned twice because the last paragraph deals mostly with composition but techincally it is still background information, so I didn't split it. However I removed his first name from the second mentioning.
This is the sentence I'm referring to (second paragraph): "It was written by Usher, Sean Garrett, Alonzo Mathis, Sean Garrett and Zaytoven, and was produced by the latter two." --
S Masters (
talk)
15:12, 24 April 2010 (UTC)reply
Other than the above, the article has no major issues.
Summary: Thank you for all the fixes. I am confident that the article now meets all the requirements for a Good Article, and I am happy to list it as such. --
S Masters (
talk)
04:28, 25 April 2010 (UTC)reply