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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk) 18:36, 8 April 2011 (UTC)
I'll be reviewing this article. I'll give it a read through now and add any points I see below. Miyagawa (talk) 18:36, 8 April 2011 (UTC)
Actually, after reading the article through three times and trying to find further issues, I can't find fault with the rest of the article. Very nice job, placing it on hold so you can fix the line in the lead. Miyagawa (talk) 19:22, 8 April 2011 (UTC)
All looks good, happy to grade this one as a GA. Miyagawa (talk) 10:42, 9 April 2011 (UTC)
In the sentence "Melquiades Ramos . . . predicted that the body had been in the water for two days prior to discovery." (Necroscopy section), the word predicted seems inappropriate when talking of a past event not subject to subsequent confirmation. The contributor may have had predicated in mind, but as this is itself ambiguous and uncommon, a different substitution might be more appropriate. Speculated? Estimated? - the best choice may depend on the source material. {The poster formerly known as 87.81,230.195} 90.197.66.111 ( talk) 11:08, 18 April 2011 (UTC)
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Panama Creature was an
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Brown-throated Sloth? |
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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk) 18:36, 8 April 2011 (UTC)
I'll be reviewing this article. I'll give it a read through now and add any points I see below. Miyagawa (talk) 18:36, 8 April 2011 (UTC)
Actually, after reading the article through three times and trying to find further issues, I can't find fault with the rest of the article. Very nice job, placing it on hold so you can fix the line in the lead. Miyagawa (talk) 19:22, 8 April 2011 (UTC)
All looks good, happy to grade this one as a GA. Miyagawa (talk) 10:42, 9 April 2011 (UTC)
In the sentence "Melquiades Ramos . . . predicted that the body had been in the water for two days prior to discovery." (Necroscopy section), the word predicted seems inappropriate when talking of a past event not subject to subsequent confirmation. The contributor may have had predicated in mind, but as this is itself ambiguous and uncommon, a different substitution might be more appropriate. Speculated? Estimated? - the best choice may depend on the source material. {The poster formerly known as 87.81,230.195} 90.197.66.111 ( talk) 11:08, 18 April 2011 (UTC)