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I'm proposing a substantial article rewrite, because this just feels like a copy paste of a sales pitch. 46.39.172.198 ( talk) 15:04, 19 May 2023 (UTC)
The images in the article should be replaced with ones that do not feature company names/logos if possible to remove any possible promotion. Cyifmae ( talk) 18:25, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
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I'm proposing a substantial article rewrite, because this just feels like a copy paste of a sales pitch. 46.39.172.198 ( talk) 15:04, 19 May 2023 (UTC)
The images in the article should be replaced with ones that do not feature company names/logos if possible to remove any possible promotion. Cyifmae ( talk) 18:25, 22 April 2024 (UTC)