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Removed maintenance templates

  • article is not written like an advertisement currently - it appears to only contain factual details about subject with reference citations
  • relevant links within wikipedia have been added
  • external links appear to conform with wikipedia standards
  • the article has several primary source citations, but they are useful

-- B william r ( talk) 20:36, 3 October 2017 (UTC) reply

That's still not sufficient reasoning. Please see WP:SHOT and WP:ITSUSEFUL for more info. ToThAc ( talk) 20:46, 3 October 2017 (UTC) reply
Please comment further so wiki editors can improve this article. The templates do not offer specific guidance, their background links offer only general information. What do you think is needed for this article? -- B william r ( talk) 15:25, 4 October 2017 (UTC) reply
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Removed maintenance templates

  • article is not written like an advertisement currently - it appears to only contain factual details about subject with reference citations
  • relevant links within wikipedia have been added
  • external links appear to conform with wikipedia standards
  • the article has several primary source citations, but they are useful

-- B william r ( talk) 20:36, 3 October 2017 (UTC) reply

That's still not sufficient reasoning. Please see WP:SHOT and WP:ITSUSEFUL for more info. ToThAc ( talk) 20:46, 3 October 2017 (UTC) reply
Please comment further so wiki editors can improve this article. The templates do not offer specific guidance, their background links offer only general information. What do you think is needed for this article? -- B william r ( talk) 15:25, 4 October 2017 (UTC) reply

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