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Your page looks great overall! It was very easy to follow and used appropriate level language. One suggestion I have is to consider placing the "History" section as the very first heading/portion of the article, right before pathophysiology. It seemed out of place when it appeared at the end. I think putting it first would also be a good transition into the pathophysiology section since you also mention how only animal studies have been done. WhiteChocolateRaspberryTruffle ( talk) 23:50, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 2 March 2021 and 26 March 2021. Further details are available
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Walkermangin.
Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT ( talk) 02:02, 18 January 2022 (UTC)
Your page looks great overall! It was very easy to follow and used appropriate level language. One suggestion I have is to consider placing the "History" section as the very first heading/portion of the article, right before pathophysiology. It seemed out of place when it appeared at the end. I think putting it first would also be a good transition into the pathophysiology section since you also mention how only animal studies have been done. WhiteChocolateRaspberryTruffle ( talk) 23:50, 23 March 2021 (UTC)