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This sentence: "Demonstrated neurophysiological studies a close relationship between increased P-wave density during post-training REM sleep and learning performance." doesn't make sense.
Should it contain the word "show" between "studies" and "a"?
Or should it read, "Neurophysiological studies demonstrate a close relationship between increased P-wave density during post-training REM sleep and learning performance."?
109.149.155.212 ( talk) 18:04, 20 September 2011 (UTC)
- Basically the latter -- I have reworded the sentence. Let me note that this doesn't look like a high-quality article to me, and I would take anything it says with a grain of salt. Looie496 ( talk) 18:15, 20 September 2011 (UTC)
It would be useful to add some information about the frequencies of these waves (alpha, beta, gamma, and so forth). I did a quick but incomplete source check, and it looks like they occur at more than one frequency. -- Tryptofish ( talk) 00:48, 2 January 2019 (UTC)
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This sentence: "Demonstrated neurophysiological studies a close relationship between increased P-wave density during post-training REM sleep and learning performance." doesn't make sense.
Should it contain the word "show" between "studies" and "a"?
Or should it read, "Neurophysiological studies demonstrate a close relationship between increased P-wave density during post-training REM sleep and learning performance."?
109.149.155.212 ( talk) 18:04, 20 September 2011 (UTC)
- Basically the latter -- I have reworded the sentence. Let me note that this doesn't look like a high-quality article to me, and I would take anything it says with a grain of salt. Looie496 ( talk) 18:15, 20 September 2011 (UTC)
It would be useful to add some information about the frequencies of these waves (alpha, beta, gamma, and so forth). I did a quick but incomplete source check, and it looks like they occur at more than one frequency. -- Tryptofish ( talk) 00:48, 2 January 2019 (UTC)