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DYK nomination
I'd like to see this article nominated to appear on the main page as part of did you know. I'm just wondering what everyone elses thoughts on what might be a good hook? Some ideas include:
- ... that Outlaw Run at Silver Dollar City will become the only wooden roller coaster to feature inversions when it opens in 2013?
- ... that the Outlaw Run wooden roller coaster at Silver Dollar City will become the only ride of its type to feature inversions when it opens in 2013?
- ... that in 2013 the Outlaw Run wooden roller coaster at Silver Dollar City will become the only ride of its type to feature inversions?
Thoughts? I personally prefer the third. I couldn't really think of a hook that includes the fact that it will be the steepest wooden roller coaster as well as the inversion statistic. Themeparkgc Talk 00:13, 10 August 2012 (UTC)
- I personally like the first. It seems to catch me better than the other. I think the of it's type might make it a little confusing for some readers.-- Astros4477 ( talk) 03:21, 10 August 2012 (UTC)
- How about:
- ... that Outlaw Run at the Silver Dollar City amusement park will become the only wooden roller coaster to feature inversions when it opens in 2013?
- ? Themeparkgc Talk 07:32, 12 August 2012 (UTC)
- How about:
- That sounds good.-- Astros4477 ( talk) 10:04, 12 August 2012 (UTC)
Still more expansion to do
Even though I have completed a huge expansion of the article from its original stub state, there are still a few items the article is missing. Namely a section on the theme of the ride (which could fit under Characteristics) and some information about the construction of the ride (which could fit under the History section). If anyone wants to tackle either of these feel free. If not I'll add them in the coming days. Themeparkgc Talk 00:32, 10 August 2012 (UTC)
| This is an archive of past discussions. Do not edit the contents of this page. If you wish to start a new discussion or revive an old one, please do so on the current talk page. |
| Archive 1 |
DYK nomination
I'd like to see this article nominated to appear on the main page as part of did you know. I'm just wondering what everyone elses thoughts on what might be a good hook? Some ideas include:
- ... that Outlaw Run at Silver Dollar City will become the only wooden roller coaster to feature inversions when it opens in 2013?
- ... that the Outlaw Run wooden roller coaster at Silver Dollar City will become the only ride of its type to feature inversions when it opens in 2013?
- ... that in 2013 the Outlaw Run wooden roller coaster at Silver Dollar City will become the only ride of its type to feature inversions?
Thoughts? I personally prefer the third. I couldn't really think of a hook that includes the fact that it will be the steepest wooden roller coaster as well as the inversion statistic. Themeparkgc Talk 00:13, 10 August 2012 (UTC)
- I personally like the first. It seems to catch me better than the other. I think the of it's type might make it a little confusing for some readers.-- Astros4477 ( talk) 03:21, 10 August 2012 (UTC)
- How about:
- ... that Outlaw Run at the Silver Dollar City amusement park will become the only wooden roller coaster to feature inversions when it opens in 2013?
- ? Themeparkgc Talk 07:32, 12 August 2012 (UTC)
- How about:
- That sounds good.-- Astros4477 ( talk) 10:04, 12 August 2012 (UTC)
Still more expansion to do
Even though I have completed a huge expansion of the article from its original stub state, there are still a few items the article is missing. Namely a section on the theme of the ride (which could fit under Characteristics) and some information about the construction of the ride (which could fit under the History section). If anyone wants to tackle either of these feel free. If not I'll add them in the coming days. Themeparkgc Talk 00:32, 10 August 2012 (UTC)