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WP:OVERLINK of Blur under producers but they are not listed in personnel under this role, so either add there or remove from the infobox if they actually did not produce the song
All of the writing and production credits need to be written out in the body since they are in the lead
"serving as an additional producer." → "also serving as a producer."
Mention the premiere before the single release; something like, "After being premiered via
BBC Radio 1 on 3 March, it..."
Add PopMatters ref because you need more than one source to verify the ballad description
"and also features Albarn's unadulterated vocals and" → "before Albarn's unadulterated vocals and" since otherwise it sounds like these appear at the start
"simplistic drums," as well as" → "simplistic drums", as well as" per MOS:QUOTE
"string group, as well as a tambourine, are" → "
string group and a tambourine are" with the pipe
"Lyrically, it deals with" → "Lyrically, the song deals with" making this a new para
"gently out of time."" → "gently out of time"."
"departure from the group." → "departure from Blur."
"with these elements blending" → "He noted the elements are blended" as a new sentence
"with
Alex James's "loping" bass line,
Dave Rowntree's" → "with James' "loping"
bass line, Rowntree's" with the pipe (they will have already been mentioned by here once you add in writers)
Critical reception
"received positive reviews" → "was met with positive reviews"
"called it "their most" → "called it the band's "most" per this being a new section
MOS:QUOTE issues throughout this section; these only apply when it is not a full sentence quoted
"praised the song," → "praised the song too,"
"in it," and "suddenly" → "in it" and "suddenly"
""Out of Time" was "lovely,"" → ""Out of Time" is "lovely,""
"while Barry Walters from" → "whereas Barry Walters from" to avoid overusage of "while"
Remove "for "Out of Time"" after the accompanying part since the word implies this was to accompany the song of the article
"American military machine."" → "American military machine"." per MOS:QUOTE
"The video premiered" → "The visual premiered" to avoid overusage of video
"is centred on" → "is centred around"
"don't know anymore..."." → "don't know anymore..." since the ellipsis ends the sentence, plus you need a source here because it is a quote so
MOS:TVPLOT does not apply
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Pop music, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of articles related to
pop music on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
the discussion and see a list of open tasks.Pop musicWikipedia:WikiProject Pop musicTemplate:WikiProject Pop musicPop music articles
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Songs, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
songs on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
the discussion and see a list of open tasks.SongsWikipedia:WikiProject SongsTemplate:WikiProject Songssong articles
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Rock music, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
Rock music on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
the discussion and see a list of open tasks.Rock musicWikipedia:WikiProject Rock musicTemplate:WikiProject Rock musicRock music articles
WP:OVERLINK of Blur under producers but they are not listed in personnel under this role, so either add there or remove from the infobox if they actually did not produce the song
All of the writing and production credits need to be written out in the body since they are in the lead
"serving as an additional producer." → "also serving as a producer."
Mention the premiere before the single release; something like, "After being premiered via
BBC Radio 1 on 3 March, it..."
Add PopMatters ref because you need more than one source to verify the ballad description
"and also features Albarn's unadulterated vocals and" → "before Albarn's unadulterated vocals and" since otherwise it sounds like these appear at the start
"simplistic drums," as well as" → "simplistic drums", as well as" per MOS:QUOTE
"string group, as well as a tambourine, are" → "
string group and a tambourine are" with the pipe
"Lyrically, it deals with" → "Lyrically, the song deals with" making this a new para
"gently out of time."" → "gently out of time"."
"departure from the group." → "departure from Blur."
"with these elements blending" → "He noted the elements are blended" as a new sentence
"with
Alex James's "loping" bass line,
Dave Rowntree's" → "with James' "loping"
bass line, Rowntree's" with the pipe (they will have already been mentioned by here once you add in writers)
Critical reception
"received positive reviews" → "was met with positive reviews"
"called it "their most" → "called it the band's "most" per this being a new section
MOS:QUOTE issues throughout this section; these only apply when it is not a full sentence quoted
"praised the song," → "praised the song too,"
"in it," and "suddenly" → "in it" and "suddenly"
""Out of Time" was "lovely,"" → ""Out of Time" is "lovely,""
"while Barry Walters from" → "whereas Barry Walters from" to avoid overusage of "while"
Remove "for "Out of Time"" after the accompanying part since the word implies this was to accompany the song of the article
"American military machine."" → "American military machine"." per MOS:QUOTE
"The video premiered" → "The visual premiered" to avoid overusage of video
"is centred on" → "is centred around"
"don't know anymore..."." → "don't know anymore..." since the ellipsis ends the sentence, plus you need a source here because it is a quote so
MOS:TVPLOT does not apply