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09:38, 4 December 2022 (UTC)
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I will conduct this review today! --
K. Peake
09:38, 4 December 2022 (UTC)
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Shouldn't the studio be identified as The Chocolate Factory?
Done Sorry, misread the booklet.
Pipe Chicago, Illinois to
Chicago in the infobox
Done
"It features its songwriters
Polow da Don and its producer" → "The song features guest appearances from record producer
Polow da Don and singer"
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Add a sentence after the above one mentioning who wrote and produced it
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"In the United States the song" → "In the United States, the song"
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Not done Piped it to Kelly#Exposure of child sexual abuse material and indictment (2002)
Simply change the "over" part of comp to mentioning piano melodies, minus any quotation marks
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"It received mixed reviews from
contemporary critics who either complimented or criticized" → "The song received mixed reviews from
music critics , who were split towards"
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"platforms following new allegations" → "platforms, following new allegations"
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"and
Jamal "Polow Da Don" Jones ," → "and
Jamal "Polow da Don" Jones ," with the pipe
Done Scrap my comment.
Comment: Hmm, sorry, don't follow. =]
"collaborated with the latter who, previously" → "collaborated with the record producer, who previously" to be specific
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"Jeff Meeks and Eric Schlotzer" → "Jeff Meeks, and Eric Schlotzer"
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Remove overly obvious wikilink on Chicago, Illinois
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Remove the comma after second studio album
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Remove the comma after second single
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"follows Kelly's acquittal" → "came a couple of months after Kelly's acquittal" removing the part from the end of the sentence in this context
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Composition and reception
Audio sample looks good!
""Out of This Club" is" → "Musically, "Out of This Club" is"
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""mid
tempo jam",[3] production is" → ""mid-
tempo jam",[3] the production is" per the source
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""plush beat" which results" → ""plush beat", which results"
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"a cascading fashion" with the artists" → "a cascading fashion", with the artists"
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"According Joey Guerra from the" → "According to Joey Guerra from the"
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The party lifestyle part is not sourced
Comment: You mean to remove the pipe to Playboy lifestyle
"is a possbile" → "is a possible"
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"Polow Da Don's rap line," → "Polow da Don's rap line,"
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"which was produced by himself." → "which he had previously produced."
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"and producer commenting he is" → "and producer, commenting he is"
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"and noted down" → "and he noted down"
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"didn't expect anything else from Kelly characterizing it" → "lacked expectations for Kelly, characterizing the song"
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"criticized Kelly's songwriting describing it as" → "derided Kelly's songwriting as"
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"as "phoned-in" adding he" → "as "phoned-in", adding he"
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"lambasted "Out Of This Club" highlighting it" → "lambasted "Out Of This Club", pinpointing it"
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Add the Bubbling Under position as the final para of this section, as that is commercial reception
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"which represents the 25 songs which failed" → "which represented the 25 songs that failed" since the chart no longer exists
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Make this the section after removal
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Removal from album and sale
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"Beginning April of that year," → "Beginning April 2019,"
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"with
Heat magazine member Kimberly Wyatt" → "with
Heat magazine, member Kimberly Wyatt"
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"was out of the group's hands." → "was out of the group's hands:"
Done
Copyvio score looks fairly decent at 36.7%!!
Cite Radio & Records as work/website instead on ref 4
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Remove the publisher from ref 7
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Pinging @
Kyle Peake :
Onegreatjoke (
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23:39, 10 December 2022 (UTC)
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