I'm putting this on hold for one very minor prose change and one source:
In the third paragraph of
Gameplay references "the passenger", as if that gameplay element had already been established. Is Heart Attack the only mode with a passenger? I think it would read better as something along the lines of:
"In addition to attempting to complete certain stages, a passenger riding in the player's vehicle will frequently request certain stunts and actions."
As far as I know there's not yet been any consensus on using Siliconera (reference 6) as a reliable source.
I'm putting this on hold for one very minor prose change and one source:
In the third paragraph of
Gameplay references "the passenger", as if that gameplay element had already been established. Is Heart Attack the only mode with a passenger? I think it would read better as something along the lines of:
"In addition to attempting to complete certain stages, a passenger riding in the player's vehicle will frequently request certain stunts and actions."
As far as I know there's not yet been any consensus on using Siliconera (reference 6) as a reliable source.