heavily rebuilt into more modern -> heavily modernized
I don't think "modernized" really captures what was done to the ships - that usually means less radical changes than what happened here.
considered rebuilding the ships a second time -> considered rebuilding the ships for the second time
Done
but abandoned the idea due to their "economic" or "financial" state
It was the condition of the ships, not the Ottoman finances that led to the abandonment of the project - added "deteriorated" instead
Infobox; Please check the In commission years, I think it is to be 1885
Good catch, but it should be 1865
Section 1; all good
Section 1.1; all good; Consistency maintained, all the parameters—Displacement, Length, Beam, Draft, Power, Propulsion, Speed, Armament and armor—seem fine. Conversion templates and links in right place
Section 1.2;
25.4 mm (1.00 in); maintain consistency with others, please fix the template to display one decimal digit
Fixed
Section 3;
were heavily rebuilt in the early 1890s, being converted into more modern barbette ships; Please follow the suggestion from lead
This dup link script pretty many dup links, but I think there is some error in that. Please verify.
Yeah, I've noticed lately the duplink checker isn't considering the lead and body separate sections anymore. Maybe I'll ask Ucucha about that.
heavily rebuilt into more modern -> heavily modernized
I don't think "modernized" really captures what was done to the ships - that usually means less radical changes than what happened here.
considered rebuilding the ships a second time -> considered rebuilding the ships for the second time
Done
but abandoned the idea due to their "economic" or "financial" state
It was the condition of the ships, not the Ottoman finances that led to the abandonment of the project - added "deteriorated" instead
Infobox; Please check the In commission years, I think it is to be 1885
Good catch, but it should be 1865
Section 1; all good
Section 1.1; all good; Consistency maintained, all the parameters—Displacement, Length, Beam, Draft, Power, Propulsion, Speed, Armament and armor—seem fine. Conversion templates and links in right place
Section 1.2;
25.4 mm (1.00 in); maintain consistency with others, please fix the template to display one decimal digit
Fixed
Section 3;
were heavily rebuilt in the early 1890s, being converted into more modern barbette ships; Please follow the suggestion from lead
This dup link script pretty many dup links, but I think there is some error in that. Please verify.
Yeah, I've noticed lately the duplink checker isn't considering the lead and body separate sections anymore. Maybe I'll ask Ucucha about that.