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Reviewer: TrangaBellam ( talk · contribs) 10:54, 1 January 2023 (UTC)
File:Kyrgyz Khanate map.jpg is unsourced and in Russian: probably better to remove it. a455bcd9 (Antoine) ( talk) 11:06, 1 January 2023 (UTC)
Ormon's reign saw a centralization of the Kyrgyz tribesneeds to be reframed.
However, Ormon's father, Niyazbek, is said to have made "little impression on Sarybagysh memory" besides being the father of Ormon- Please mention the reason, speculated by Prior in note 15.
portal [that] provides authors with the opportunity to freely publish their literary works on the Internet on the basis of a user agreement.Glorified blog; there is no peer-review. SPS applies.
The textbook is prepared on the basis of textbooks approved by the Ministry of Education and Science of the Kyrgyz Republic.The next page,
The textbook is written and prepared in accordance with the requirements of state policy and standards of teaching the subject in educational institutions of Kyrgyzstan.The book ends with,
The Kyrgyz Republic, having gained independence, gave an opportunity to its citizens, regardless of ethnicity, to immigrate to any country and obtain citizenship. Kyrgyzstan, however, is the support and hope for its sons and daughters living in all parts of the world. The Constitution of the Kyrgyz Republic contains a provision that the state consistently defends the interests of its citizens, even those overseas.
At 25, around the year 1816, Ormon had risen to become the chief of the Sarybagysh tribe.- Poor citation practices, and poor choice of using wikivoice. There is a reason why Soltonoev is explicitly attributed in the source; his dates are often wrong. See Prior; p. 106 for an example.
I am afraid that this is a quick-fail (Criteria 2b). However, I will wait for comments from the nominator. TrangaBellam ( talk) 17:55, 26 January 2023 (UTC)
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Reviewer: TrangaBellam ( talk · contribs) 10:54, 1 January 2023 (UTC)
File:Kyrgyz Khanate map.jpg is unsourced and in Russian: probably better to remove it. a455bcd9 (Antoine) ( talk) 11:06, 1 January 2023 (UTC)
Ormon's reign saw a centralization of the Kyrgyz tribesneeds to be reframed.
However, Ormon's father, Niyazbek, is said to have made "little impression on Sarybagysh memory" besides being the father of Ormon- Please mention the reason, speculated by Prior in note 15.
portal [that] provides authors with the opportunity to freely publish their literary works on the Internet on the basis of a user agreement.Glorified blog; there is no peer-review. SPS applies.
The textbook is prepared on the basis of textbooks approved by the Ministry of Education and Science of the Kyrgyz Republic.The next page,
The textbook is written and prepared in accordance with the requirements of state policy and standards of teaching the subject in educational institutions of Kyrgyzstan.The book ends with,
The Kyrgyz Republic, having gained independence, gave an opportunity to its citizens, regardless of ethnicity, to immigrate to any country and obtain citizenship. Kyrgyzstan, however, is the support and hope for its sons and daughters living in all parts of the world. The Constitution of the Kyrgyz Republic contains a provision that the state consistently defends the interests of its citizens, even those overseas.
At 25, around the year 1816, Ormon had risen to become the chief of the Sarybagysh tribe.- Poor citation practices, and poor choice of using wikivoice. There is a reason why Soltonoev is explicitly attributed in the source; his dates are often wrong. See Prior; p. 106 for an example.
I am afraid that this is a quick-fail (Criteria 2b). However, I will wait for comments from the nominator. TrangaBellam ( talk) 17:55, 26 January 2023 (UTC)