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Reviewer: Zawed ( talk · contribs) 06:19, 4 January 2017 (UTC)
Since I did the Operation Trident review, I will take this one as well. Comments to come over the following days. Zawed ( talk) 06:19, 4 January 2017 (UTC)
I did some minor copyediting to the prose, please review these to make sure I haven't altered any meanings. Some of the copy editing changes to the Operation Trident article should have been replicated here as it would have made my review more efficient. I strongly recommend you have a look at your other articles that are still awaiting a GAR to see if feedback on already reviewed articles could be applied. In the meantime, issues I noted with this article:
That's all for now. Cheers. Zawed ( talk) 01:23, 10 January 2017 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Zawed ( talk · contribs) 06:19, 4 January 2017 (UTC)
Since I did the Operation Trident review, I will take this one as well. Comments to come over the following days. Zawed ( talk) 06:19, 4 January 2017 (UTC)
I did some minor copyediting to the prose, please review these to make sure I haven't altered any meanings. Some of the copy editing changes to the Operation Trident article should have been replicated here as it would have made my review more efficient. I strongly recommend you have a look at your other articles that are still awaiting a GAR to see if feedback on already reviewed articles could be applied. In the meantime, issues I noted with this article:
That's all for now. Cheers. Zawed ( talk) 01:23, 10 January 2017 (UTC)