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Reviewer: Parsecboy ( talk · contribs) 20:03, 18 December 2018 (UTC) reply

I'll take this one. Parsecboy ( talk) 20:03, 18 December 2018 (UTC) reply

Mostly minor nitpicks:

• Image copyright tags look good
• Is there a map that could be used?
  • I've just added a map of northern Norway and Sweden which shows the main locations mentioned Nick-D ( talk) 10:03, 19 December 2018 (UTC) reply
• There are a couple of dupe links that need to be fixed
  • Sorry, which ones? I've fixed linking Royal Navy twice. Nick-D ( talk) 10:03, 19 December 2018 (UTC) reply
    • That was one of them - the other one is the Mosquito. By the way, User:Evad37/duplinks-alt is a useful tool to add. Parsecboy ( talk) 13:08, 19 December 2018 (UTC) reply
      • Fixed, and I've added that code. Nick-D ( talk) 09:50, 20 December 2018 (UTC) reply
        • All right, everything looks to be in order - I'm happy to promote. Parsecboy ( talk) 12:26, 20 December 2018 (UTC) reply
• I'd recommend translating the German ranks
  • I've swapped 'Großadmiral' to 'Grand Admiral' as the translation is direct. There doesn't seem to be a clear equivalent for 'Konteradmiral' in this era. Nick-D ( talk) 10:03, 19 December 2018 (UTC) reply
    • I'd probably just translate it to Rear admiral. In those days, Konteradmiral was the equivalent of a 1-star (the USN's Rear admiral (lower half), for instance), but I don't know that that level of specificity is all that necessary here. Parsecboy ( talk) 13:08, 19 December 2018 (UTC) reply
• I'd link battleship, aircraft carrier, engine room, Flare (countermeasure), destroyer, flak ship
  • All linked Nick-D ( talk) 10:03, 19 December 2018 (UTC) reply
• "be simpler conduct" -> "simpler to conduct"
  • Fixed Nick-D ( talk) 10:03, 19 December 2018 (UTC) reply

Nice work as usual. Parsecboy ( talk) 21:27, 18 December 2018 (UTC) reply

• Thanks a lot for reviewing Nick-D ( talk) 10:03, 19 December 2018 (UTC) reply