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Reviewer: Moswento ( talk · contribs) 09:46, 3 December 2013 (UTC)
Overall, this is a really well-written article. Clear, easy to follow, covering the main course of events well. I have no problems with any of the sources or how they're used (assuming an amount of good faith on a few). I have a few very minor comments on the text, and then this is ready for promotion. A pleasure to read, and a pleasure to review. Thank you! Moswento talky 10:56, 3 December 2013 (UTC)
Thank you for the review. I believe I have addressed all your concerns, but I decided to keep the ""In the immediate aftermath of the bombings in Zagreb..." sentence where it is right now, i.e. aftermath section since it deals with the aftermath, regardless how immediate. Hope that's alright with you. Cheers.-- Tomobe03 ( talk) 13:39, 3 December 2013 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Moswento ( talk · contribs) 09:46, 3 December 2013 (UTC)
Overall, this is a really well-written article. Clear, easy to follow, covering the main course of events well. I have no problems with any of the sources or how they're used (assuming an amount of good faith on a few). I have a few very minor comments on the text, and then this is ready for promotion. A pleasure to read, and a pleasure to review. Thank you! Moswento talky 10:56, 3 December 2013 (UTC)
Thank you for the review. I believe I have addressed all your concerns, but I decided to keep the ""In the immediate aftermath of the bombings in Zagreb..." sentence where it is right now, i.e. aftermath section since it deals with the aftermath, regardless how immediate. Hope that's alright with you. Cheers.-- Tomobe03 ( talk) 13:39, 3 December 2013 (UTC)