| GA toolbox |
|---|
| Reviewing |
Article (
|
visual edit |
history) ·
Article talk (
|
history) ·
Watch
Reviewer: Peacemaker67 ( talk · contribs) 23:01, 24 February 2017 (UTC)
- Monte Bello Islands is overlinked in the lead, Lancashire is also overlinked in the body, as is Special Relationship
- The 1948 modus vivendi is mentioned, but what was it, and why did it include Canada?
Due to the wartime Quebec Agreement. Added a bit about this.
Hawkeye7 (
talk)
01:05, 25 February 2017 (UTC)
- worth stating that the Monte Bello Islands were uninhabited at first mention, and stating how far off the WA coast they are
- Added.
Hawkeye7 (
talk)
01:05, 25 February 2017 (UTC)
- suggest On 26 February 1952, Churchill announced in the House of Commons that the first British atomic bomb test would occur in Australia before the end of the year.
- it would be useful to give the distances between the islands mentioned, particularly between Hermite Island and HMS Plym
- pannaces should be pinnaces
- add OCLC for Semaphore 223432572
- Were there further tests on the Monte Bello Islands? I'd expect a mention if so, or an indication of where subsequent British tests were conducted
- Yes, there was another test series in 1956.
Hawkeye7 (
talk)
01:05, 25 February 2017 (UTC)
- The current day impact on the Monte Bello Islands in terms of still being radioactive/a prohibited area etc should probably be mentioned.
- They're not a prohibited area. You can visit them. Added a bit about this.
Hawkeye7 (
talk)
01:05, 25 February 2017 (UTC)
- All the images need a PD-US tag
- Added.
Hawkeye7 (
talk)
01:05, 25 February 2017 (UTC)
That's me done. Peacemaker67 ( click to talk to me) 23:34, 24 February 2017 (UTC)
- I think that does it. Hawkeye7 ( talk) 01:11, 25 February 2017 (UTC)
This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, and is illustrated by appropriately license images with appropriate captions. Passing. Peacemaker67 ( click to talk to me) 01:58, 25 February 2017 (UTC)
| GA toolbox |
|---|
| Reviewing |
Article (
|
visual edit |
history) ·
Article talk (
|
history) ·
Watch
Reviewer: Peacemaker67 ( talk · contribs) 23:01, 24 February 2017 (UTC)
- Monte Bello Islands is overlinked in the lead, Lancashire is also overlinked in the body, as is Special Relationship
- The 1948 modus vivendi is mentioned, but what was it, and why did it include Canada?
- Due to the wartime Quebec Agreement. Added a bit about this.
Hawkeye7 (
talk)
01:05, 25 February 2017 (UTC)
- worth stating that the Monte Bello Islands were uninhabited at first mention, and stating how far off the WA coast they are
- Added.
Hawkeye7 (
talk)
01:05, 25 February 2017 (UTC)
- suggest On 26 February 1952, Churchill announced in the House of Commons that the first British atomic bomb test would occur in Australia before the end of the year.
- it would be useful to give the distances between the islands mentioned, particularly between Hermite Island and HMS Plym
- pannaces should be pinnaces
- add OCLC for Semaphore 223432572
- Were there further tests on the Monte Bello Islands? I'd expect a mention if so, or an indication of where subsequent British tests were conducted
- Yes, there was another test series in 1956.
Hawkeye7 (
talk)
01:05, 25 February 2017 (UTC)
- The current day impact on the Monte Bello Islands in terms of still being radioactive/a prohibited area etc should probably be mentioned.
- They're not a prohibited area. You can visit them. Added a bit about this.
Hawkeye7 (
talk)
01:05, 25 February 2017 (UTC)
- All the images need a PD-US tag
- Added.
Hawkeye7 (
talk)
01:05, 25 February 2017 (UTC)
That's me done. Peacemaker67 ( click to talk to me) 23:34, 24 February 2017 (UTC)
- I think that does it. Hawkeye7 ( talk) 01:11, 25 February 2017 (UTC)
This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, and is illustrated by appropriately license images with appropriate captions. Passing. Peacemaker67 ( click to talk to me) 01:58, 25 February 2017 (UTC)