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After receiving the comments about the neutrality of the entry I edited the review section of the entry so that exact quotes from the reviews were used as opposed to the paraphrasing that I had used in the original entry.

Is this sufficient for improving the neutrality of the article or should I make further changes?

Any comments on how to improve this page are welcome, thanks.

( Laurence Cox1 ( talk) 13:07, 7 January 2015 (UTC)) reply

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Untitled

After receiving the comments about the neutrality of the entry I edited the review section of the entry so that exact quotes from the reviews were used as opposed to the paraphrasing that I had used in the original entry.

Is this sufficient for improving the neutrality of the article or should I make further changes?

Any comments on how to improve this page are welcome, thanks.

( Laurence Cox1 ( talk) 13:07, 7 January 2015 (UTC)) reply


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