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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak ( talk · contribs) 04:14, 9 September 2015 (UTC)
Hello
Efe, I'm
Cartoon network freak, and this is my GA review for your article. As you can see, I've split the article up into sections that mimic the articles layout, for ease. Any green text
indicates I'm quoting from the article.
*for his second studio album, x.
-> for his second studio album x (2014).
*Sheeran wrote for the last time about his ex-girlfriend who inspired all the romantic compositions off his debut album, +.
-> The track marks the last occasion, where Sheeran wrote aboute his ex-girlfriend. She was also a big inspiration for Sheeran's debut record + (2011).
*The minimalist song, produced by frequent collaborator Jake Gosling, derives its music from acoustic guitar.
-> A minimalist song, "One" was produced by Sheeran's long-time collaborator Jake Gosling, who derived its music from acoustic guitar.
*its being guitar-driven
-> its guitar-driven sound
*An official video, which was shot in an empty Wembley Stadium and rendered in black and white, preceded the song's release on 14 May 2014.
-> The official video of "One" was shot in an empty Wembley Stadium and preceded the song's release on 14 May 2014.
Being the first promotional single from x, the release was meant to balance "Sing", the R&B-pop lead single that was feared would alienate Sheeran's fan base.-> The track is the first promotional single from x, and was meant to ballance "Sing", the album's lead single, which would aliente Sheeran's fan base.
Inside his dressing room while on a tour in Perth, Australia,[2] he composed the song on a guitar made of a whiskey barrel.[3]-> While he was on tour in Perth, Australia, he composed the song on a guitar made of a whiskey barrel inside his dressing room.
off of-> featured on
while the rest are about-> while the rest is about
"One" was released on 16 May 2014 as the first promotional single from x, available as an "instant grat" download on iTunes when the album is pre-ordered.-> "One" was released on 16 May 2014 as the first promotional single from x. It was already available as an "instant grat" download on iTunes while the album was pre-ordered.
The release was meant to counterbalance "Sing", the R&B-pop lead single that was intended to create hype but was feared would alienate his fan base.-> The release of the song ws meant to counterballance "Sing", the album's lead single, which was intended to alienate Sheeran's fan base.
official video was premiered-> official video premiered
once in the US chart-> once on the US chart
"fragile acoustic pop"and
Sarah Rodman.
Credits adapted from x album liner notes:-> Credits are adapted fromthe liner notes of x.
A lot of work for you in the 7 days for you, but I give you a chance. If you have any questions, feel free to ak me on my talk page.
Cartoon network freak (
talk) 05:08, 9 October 2015 (UTC)
I actually only had one comment, and it was more of a suggestion. Apologies if you were to believe I had multiple comments! Good luck with the nomination. Azealia911 talk 18:18, 14 October 2015 (UTC)
"
Sticky Studios,
Windlesham,
Surrey, England" ->
Sticky Studios
(
Windlesham,
Surrey, England)
Good luck! Cartoon network freak ( talk) 12:04, 11 November 2015 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak ( talk · contribs) 04:14, 9 September 2015 (UTC)
Hello
Efe, I'm
Cartoon network freak, and this is my GA review for your article. As you can see, I've split the article up into sections that mimic the articles layout, for ease. Any green text
indicates I'm quoting from the article.
*for his second studio album, x.
-> for his second studio album x (2014).
*Sheeran wrote for the last time about his ex-girlfriend who inspired all the romantic compositions off his debut album, +.
-> The track marks the last occasion, where Sheeran wrote aboute his ex-girlfriend. She was also a big inspiration for Sheeran's debut record + (2011).
*The minimalist song, produced by frequent collaborator Jake Gosling, derives its music from acoustic guitar.
-> A minimalist song, "One" was produced by Sheeran's long-time collaborator Jake Gosling, who derived its music from acoustic guitar.
*its being guitar-driven
-> its guitar-driven sound
*An official video, which was shot in an empty Wembley Stadium and rendered in black and white, preceded the song's release on 14 May 2014.
-> The official video of "One" was shot in an empty Wembley Stadium and preceded the song's release on 14 May 2014.
Being the first promotional single from x, the release was meant to balance "Sing", the R&B-pop lead single that was feared would alienate Sheeran's fan base.-> The track is the first promotional single from x, and was meant to ballance "Sing", the album's lead single, which would aliente Sheeran's fan base.
Inside his dressing room while on a tour in Perth, Australia,[2] he composed the song on a guitar made of a whiskey barrel.[3]-> While he was on tour in Perth, Australia, he composed the song on a guitar made of a whiskey barrel inside his dressing room.
off of-> featured on
while the rest are about-> while the rest is about
"One" was released on 16 May 2014 as the first promotional single from x, available as an "instant grat" download on iTunes when the album is pre-ordered.-> "One" was released on 16 May 2014 as the first promotional single from x. It was already available as an "instant grat" download on iTunes while the album was pre-ordered.
The release was meant to counterbalance "Sing", the R&B-pop lead single that was intended to create hype but was feared would alienate his fan base.-> The release of the song ws meant to counterballance "Sing", the album's lead single, which was intended to alienate Sheeran's fan base.
official video was premiered-> official video premiered
once in the US chart-> once on the US chart
"fragile acoustic pop"and
Sarah Rodman.
Credits adapted from x album liner notes:-> Credits are adapted fromthe liner notes of x.
A lot of work for you in the 7 days for you, but I give you a chance. If you have any questions, feel free to ak me on my talk page.
Cartoon network freak (
talk) 05:08, 9 October 2015 (UTC)
I actually only had one comment, and it was more of a suggestion. Apologies if you were to believe I had multiple comments! Good luck with the nomination. Azealia911 talk 18:18, 14 October 2015 (UTC)
"
Sticky Studios,
Windlesham,
Surrey, England" ->
Sticky Studios
(
Windlesham,
Surrey, England)
Good luck! Cartoon network freak ( talk) 12:04, 11 November 2015 (UTC)