Are the mixes solely manufactured in the United States? If not, I'd recommend mentioning other countries or replacing 'United States' with 'worldwide'
It's likely that general doughnut mixes are manufactured in other countries, but I'm unable to locate information about old-fashioned doughnut mixes as such. Most sources report about U.S. related aspects. Even searches for the generic "doughnut mix" are not providing much information. North America100018:40, 7 March 2016 (UTC)reply
The last sentence discussing doughnut makers could be expanded, possibly listing other doughnuts made with the aforementioned makers
This article is about the Old-fashioned doughnut, though, rather than
Doughnut maker's in general (presently red-linked). There's not much information available about doughnut makers relative to the preparation of this specific style of doughnut. North America100018:45, 7 March 2016 (UTC)reply
This section doesn't seem very important to me; considering there are so many variations of these donuts, is it really necessary to include this information? Since it probably should be included, I'd recommend finding another source to back up the facts you listed
Many food- and drink-related article include nutrition information, and its content is verified by a reliable book source. Reliable sources for comprehensive nutritional information about foods can be quite difficult to find (see source search examples below). I feel that this section enhances the article, whereas its omission would reduce the article's quality. North America100018:48, 7 March 2016 (UTC)reply
The statement you mentioned is pretty good, but this section as a whole could be significantly expanded. And it should be significantly expanded
There's not a great deal of information available about custom old-fashioned doughnuts or old-fashioned doughnut variations, but I managed to find a few sources that are usable as reliable. I have expanded the section: (
diff,
diff,
diff). North America100018:03, 7 March 2016 (UTC)reply
You could add several categories to this article, including "Convenience foods", "Snack foods", "American cuisine", "American desserts", "World cuisine", etc.
This article needs some expansion before passing GA status. I'm putting on hold until the nominator can significantly lengthen the article. Thanks,
Carbrera (
talk)
01:05, 6 March 2016 (UTC).reply
The article has been expanded. Note that there is not a great deal of extensive coverage about this topic, and that I created and expanded the article based upon source coverage available in online sources. North America100018:58, 7 March 2016 (UTC)reply
Are the mixes solely manufactured in the United States? If not, I'd recommend mentioning other countries or replacing 'United States' with 'worldwide'
It's likely that general doughnut mixes are manufactured in other countries, but I'm unable to locate information about old-fashioned doughnut mixes as such. Most sources report about U.S. related aspects. Even searches for the generic "doughnut mix" are not providing much information. North America100018:40, 7 March 2016 (UTC)reply
The last sentence discussing doughnut makers could be expanded, possibly listing other doughnuts made with the aforementioned makers
This article is about the Old-fashioned doughnut, though, rather than
Doughnut maker's in general (presently red-linked). There's not much information available about doughnut makers relative to the preparation of this specific style of doughnut. North America100018:45, 7 March 2016 (UTC)reply
This section doesn't seem very important to me; considering there are so many variations of these donuts, is it really necessary to include this information? Since it probably should be included, I'd recommend finding another source to back up the facts you listed
Many food- and drink-related article include nutrition information, and its content is verified by a reliable book source. Reliable sources for comprehensive nutritional information about foods can be quite difficult to find (see source search examples below). I feel that this section enhances the article, whereas its omission would reduce the article's quality. North America100018:48, 7 March 2016 (UTC)reply
The statement you mentioned is pretty good, but this section as a whole could be significantly expanded. And it should be significantly expanded
There's not a great deal of information available about custom old-fashioned doughnuts or old-fashioned doughnut variations, but I managed to find a few sources that are usable as reliable. I have expanded the section: (
diff,
diff,
diff). North America100018:03, 7 March 2016 (UTC)reply
You could add several categories to this article, including "Convenience foods", "Snack foods", "American cuisine", "American desserts", "World cuisine", etc.
This article needs some expansion before passing GA status. I'm putting on hold until the nominator can significantly lengthen the article. Thanks,
Carbrera (
talk)
01:05, 6 March 2016 (UTC).reply
The article has been expanded. Note that there is not a great deal of extensive coverage about this topic, and that I created and expanded the article based upon source coverage available in online sources. North America100018:58, 7 March 2016 (UTC)reply