"Overall, the song has received very positive reception from music critics worldwide." I think it would be better if it was like this: " "Oh Santa!" has received positive reviews from music critics.", since all the reviews are positive and only from the US. Also, link music critics.
You repeated Carey/Mariah way too much! :) You should replace Mariah with Carey, and avoid the continued use of the name/surname so much. Try to replace with she or the singer when appropriate. Otherwise, this section is pretty great. I think a screenshot would be good to visually identify the most significant part of the music video. But that is your choice. :)
DoneI don't know how to upload pictures on here, but I agree that a screenshot would be really good, perhaps one with Mariah on stage with the dancers and band around her.Calvin •
NaNaNaC'mon!23:35, 3 September 2011 (UTC)reply
You did an outstanding job with this article. I know how it's hard to gather all the information you can for a single that didn't gained media attention so much. Keep up with the amazing work. :) -
Sauloviegas (
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22:12, 3 September 2011 (UTC)reply
Thanks again. Have added 3 video reviews, they are quite hard to find, especially after a year, they have become even harder. Also made the Music video into 3 sub-sections. And thanks for adding in the screenshot!Calvin •
NaNaNaC'mon!12:46, 4 September 2011 (UTC)reply
"Overall, the song has received very positive reception from music critics worldwide." I think it would be better if it was like this: " "Oh Santa!" has received positive reviews from music critics.", since all the reviews are positive and only from the US. Also, link music critics.
You repeated Carey/Mariah way too much! :) You should replace Mariah with Carey, and avoid the continued use of the name/surname so much. Try to replace with she or the singer when appropriate. Otherwise, this section is pretty great. I think a screenshot would be good to visually identify the most significant part of the music video. But that is your choice. :)
DoneI don't know how to upload pictures on here, but I agree that a screenshot would be really good, perhaps one with Mariah on stage with the dancers and band around her.Calvin •
NaNaNaC'mon!23:35, 3 September 2011 (UTC)reply
You did an outstanding job with this article. I know how it's hard to gather all the information you can for a single that didn't gained media attention so much. Keep up with the amazing work. :) -
Sauloviegas (
talk)
22:12, 3 September 2011 (UTC)reply
Thanks again. Have added 3 video reviews, they are quite hard to find, especially after a year, they have become even harder. Also made the Music video into 3 sub-sections. And thanks for adding in the screenshot!Calvin •
NaNaNaC'mon!12:46, 4 September 2011 (UTC)reply