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This article about Offspring seems very vague and unformatted. When searching for the band "The Offspring", this page confused me for a moment before I found the link. I will edit it when I have some time.
I'm not sure that this article is anything more than a definition, and unsuited to Wikipedia per WP:WINAD. ENeville 04:53, 4 October 2006 (UTC)
Can I please add those 2 video game pictures in the article, please? User talk:Fangusu 19:52, 13 June 2008 (UTC)
I'm editing this page for a biology project but I'm unsure of things I can add, does anyone have any ideas as to what I can do to try and make it better? I was thinking about listing differents names for offspring of different species. Any thoughts? Does anyone even use this page anymore? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jstirn ( talk • contribs) 18:51, 21 May 2013 (UTC)
Much of this article is on grammatical and badly written, perhaps badly translated (from another wiki?). I can edit text to be grammatical, but only if I understand what it means. How about this partial paragraph?:
As biology, this is clumsy and awkward. As English prose… Look at that second sentence. It's not a sentence!
Removing the non-restrictive modifying clauses, we get:
... Ye-es? So... what then? And what is "The offspring of a new species"? All this applies to the offspring of any sexually reproducing pair. -- Thnidu ( talk) 21:21, 24 August 2015 (UTC)
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This article about Offspring seems very vague and unformatted. When searching for the band "The Offspring", this page confused me for a moment before I found the link. I will edit it when I have some time.
I'm not sure that this article is anything more than a definition, and unsuited to Wikipedia per WP:WINAD. ENeville 04:53, 4 October 2006 (UTC)
Can I please add those 2 video game pictures in the article, please? User talk:Fangusu 19:52, 13 June 2008 (UTC)
I'm editing this page for a biology project but I'm unsure of things I can add, does anyone have any ideas as to what I can do to try and make it better? I was thinking about listing differents names for offspring of different species. Any thoughts? Does anyone even use this page anymore? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jstirn ( talk • contribs) 18:51, 21 May 2013 (UTC)
Much of this article is on grammatical and badly written, perhaps badly translated (from another wiki?). I can edit text to be grammatical, but only if I understand what it means. How about this partial paragraph?:
As biology, this is clumsy and awkward. As English prose… Look at that second sentence. It's not a sentence!
Removing the non-restrictive modifying clauses, we get:
... Ye-es? So... what then? And what is "The offspring of a new species"? All this applies to the offspring of any sexually reproducing pair. -- Thnidu ( talk) 21:21, 24 August 2015 (UTC)