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Reviewer: Liam E. Bekker ( talk · contribs) 11:36, 16 June 2017 (UTC)
Hi
FrenchFootball, I'll be conducting the review of this page. Please see below issues that I've picked up. Where our opinions/ideas clash or differ please let me know so that we can try to hash out a solution. Please note that these are just preliminary concerns and more issues may be raised at a later stage.
Alright, that's my initial review. Let's tackle these and then we can fine-tune it to get this nomination passed. Cheers, Liam E. Bekker ( talk) 11:36, 16 June 2017 (UTC)
Alright FrenchFootball, thank you for the updates. I've reviewed the new content up until the end of the PSG section and left comments below each previous point. A lot of the issues have been resolved so we are making good progress. I'll review the remainder either this evening or during the course of tomorrow. Cheers, Liam E. Bekker ( talk) 14:02, 19 June 2017 (UTC)
Okay FrenchFootball, I've completed the second part of the review from Toulouse onwards. I've not yet looked at your changes from last night but will run through everything once more when the latest changes have been made. We're almost there. Cheers, Liam E. Bekker ( talk) 13:39, 20 June 2017 (UTC)
Hi FrenchFootball, thank you for the efficiency with which you have attended to the above suggestions. I've done a secondary review and found that the article now has the right structure to progress. I have, in line with Review instructions, attended to make some minor amendments in respect of the article. These changes relate to tone and tense for the most part. I endeavored not to remove any of the work you included, nor to add any of my own information, nor change your style. In summary, the edit I made related to:
Please have a look at the article and let me know if you are happy with the amendments I have made. If not, kindly point out the issues you have and we can discuss them here. Cheers, Liam E. Bekker ( talk) 14:05, 21 June 2017 (UTC)
→ Hi FrenchFootball, I've glanced through the article again. It seems inconsistent sometimes but where ever you've referred to goals and assists, and the amount is a single digit (i.e. 1 goal, 6 assists), please change the digit to a word (i.e. one goal, six assists), while leaving all double digits (i.e. 60 appearances) as digits. This is the correct way to do it. Scorelines do not change.
I'm still also not overly convinced by this sentence. "He scored 22 goals in 14 league appearances the following season and won the Al Kass Cup with the U17s on 15 February 2015, scoring 3 goals in 5 appearances":
Can we change that to something like ""He scored 22 goals in 14 league appearances for the U17s the following season and lifted the Al Kass Cup on 15 February 2015, ending the competition with a return of three goals in five appearances."
After that I think it will be ready for me to promote to GA. Liam E. Bekker ( talk) 13:49, 27 June 2017 (UTC)
Are there any sources for how old he was when he moved from South America to Europe, and where he moved to? Harambe Walks ( talk) 00:15, 10 September 2017 (UTC)
Can someone please help & revert this page visual back to how the other footballer pages look with the blue on the personal information, youth career, club etc. DanDan1888 ( talk) 12:37, 30 August 2020 (UTC)
Thank you! Are you able to change the picture, this is not accurate DanDan1888 ( talk) 12:55, 30 August 2020 (UTC)
If you can do that DanDan1888 ( talk) 12:58, 30 August 2020 (UTC)
I checked & there wasn’t any I don’t think but it needs to be him in a Celtic shirt as that’s the club he’s at. Google? DanDan1888 ( talk) 13:03, 30 August 2020 (UTC)
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81.131.100.90 ( talk) 13:15, 11 September 2021 (UTC) I want to change the goals as he has just scored one
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Reviewer: Liam E. Bekker ( talk · contribs) 11:36, 16 June 2017 (UTC)
Hi
FrenchFootball, I'll be conducting the review of this page. Please see below issues that I've picked up. Where our opinions/ideas clash or differ please let me know so that we can try to hash out a solution. Please note that these are just preliminary concerns and more issues may be raised at a later stage.
Alright, that's my initial review. Let's tackle these and then we can fine-tune it to get this nomination passed. Cheers, Liam E. Bekker ( talk) 11:36, 16 June 2017 (UTC)
Alright FrenchFootball, thank you for the updates. I've reviewed the new content up until the end of the PSG section and left comments below each previous point. A lot of the issues have been resolved so we are making good progress. I'll review the remainder either this evening or during the course of tomorrow. Cheers, Liam E. Bekker ( talk) 14:02, 19 June 2017 (UTC)
Okay FrenchFootball, I've completed the second part of the review from Toulouse onwards. I've not yet looked at your changes from last night but will run through everything once more when the latest changes have been made. We're almost there. Cheers, Liam E. Bekker ( talk) 13:39, 20 June 2017 (UTC)
Hi FrenchFootball, thank you for the efficiency with which you have attended to the above suggestions. I've done a secondary review and found that the article now has the right structure to progress. I have, in line with Review instructions, attended to make some minor amendments in respect of the article. These changes relate to tone and tense for the most part. I endeavored not to remove any of the work you included, nor to add any of my own information, nor change your style. In summary, the edit I made related to:
Please have a look at the article and let me know if you are happy with the amendments I have made. If not, kindly point out the issues you have and we can discuss them here. Cheers, Liam E. Bekker ( talk) 14:05, 21 June 2017 (UTC)
→ Hi FrenchFootball, I've glanced through the article again. It seems inconsistent sometimes but where ever you've referred to goals and assists, and the amount is a single digit (i.e. 1 goal, 6 assists), please change the digit to a word (i.e. one goal, six assists), while leaving all double digits (i.e. 60 appearances) as digits. This is the correct way to do it. Scorelines do not change.
I'm still also not overly convinced by this sentence. "He scored 22 goals in 14 league appearances the following season and won the Al Kass Cup with the U17s on 15 February 2015, scoring 3 goals in 5 appearances":
Can we change that to something like ""He scored 22 goals in 14 league appearances for the U17s the following season and lifted the Al Kass Cup on 15 February 2015, ending the competition with a return of three goals in five appearances."
After that I think it will be ready for me to promote to GA. Liam E. Bekker ( talk) 13:49, 27 June 2017 (UTC)
Are there any sources for how old he was when he moved from South America to Europe, and where he moved to? Harambe Walks ( talk) 00:15, 10 September 2017 (UTC)
Can someone please help & revert this page visual back to how the other footballer pages look with the blue on the personal information, youth career, club etc. DanDan1888 ( talk) 12:37, 30 August 2020 (UTC)
Thank you! Are you able to change the picture, this is not accurate DanDan1888 ( talk) 12:55, 30 August 2020 (UTC)
If you can do that DanDan1888 ( talk) 12:58, 30 August 2020 (UTC)
I checked & there wasn’t any I don’t think but it needs to be him in a Celtic shirt as that’s the club he’s at. Google? DanDan1888 ( talk) 13:03, 30 August 2020 (UTC)
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81.131.100.90 ( talk) 13:15, 11 September 2021 (UTC) I want to change the goals as he has just scored one