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Reviewer: Golden ( talk · contribs) 14:17, 13 August 2023 (UTC)
Hi Vaticidalprophet, I'm happy to review this article. — Golden talk 14:17, 13 August 2023 (UTC)
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Wallace, a high-ranking Freemason and self-described "practical mystic", took credit for the inclusion of the Eye of Providence on the dollar bill.- The trivia about him taking credit for the inclusion of the Eye of Providence on the dollar bill seems a bit out of place, as it doesn't provide any information about the book or its content.
by spreading a message of "hope and dignity" to people who felt disaffected or abandoned by mainstream society, Cayce encapsulated the practices that, Horowitz argues, made large sectors of the population open to such concepts.- This was difficult for me to understand. I suggest splitting it up to make it easier to comprehend.
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Hi Vaticidalprophet, I'm happy to review this article. — Golden talk 14:17, 13 August 2023 (UTC)
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Wallace, a high-ranking Freemason and self-described "practical mystic", took credit for the inclusion of the Eye of Providence on the dollar bill.- The trivia about him taking credit for the inclusion of the Eye of Providence on the dollar bill seems a bit out of place, as it doesn't provide any information about the book or its content.
by spreading a message of "hope and dignity" to people who felt disaffected or abandoned by mainstream society, Cayce encapsulated the practices that, Horowitz argues, made large sectors of the population open to such concepts.- This was difficult for me to understand. I suggest splitting it up to make it easier to comprehend.