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The phrase "decentres the constructed ideals of homosocial institutions" could be simplified. "challenges the typical notion of homosocial institutions" for example.

I think when we move into the realms of 'decentreing' and the idea of 'constructs' we end up more with a piece of post-modern criticism than an accessible encyclopaedia article.

91.107.4.48 ( talk) 09:28, 10 July 2008 (UTC) reply