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I am posting on behalf of Oasis Management. I am asking to reconsider the language of the 4th paragraph of the "Background" section to advance neutrality and remove excessive detail. My suggestion is to rework the paragraph like this:
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Would be grateful for the input of the wider community. SandraMurphy33 ( talk) 10:25, 18 June 2024 (UTC)
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I am posting on behalf of Oasis Management. I am asking to reconsider the language of the 4th paragraph of the "Background" section to advance neutrality and remove excessive detail. My suggestion is to rework the paragraph like this:
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Would be grateful for the input of the wider community. SandraMurphy33 ( talk) 10:25, 18 June 2024 (UTC)