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The source is the same for the first and second sentence, leave it at the end of the second phrase.
"as based largely on research" → can you provide a little more information with what this research is about? Perhaps the "research" was his own words?
I can't provide anymore information about his "research". Brymo did not go into specifics about what kind of research he did; all he said was that the album was based on research. If you think the statement should be omitted, I can do that.
Versace1608Wanna Talk?21:46, 2 April 2020 (UTC)reply
The album's lead single "Heya!" was released on 28 March 2018 → The album's lead single "Heya!" was released on 28 March 2018, along with its music video.
You have duplicate sources as in source 12, 15 and 16 → they are all the same
The album's second single "Bá’núsọ" (Yoruba: "Follow Up") was released on 9 September 2018 → The album's second single "Bá’núsọ" (Yoruba: "Follow Up") was released on 9 September 2018, along with its music video.
360nobs strikes me as a blog, as the writers seem to lack professional background
360nobs is a blog but the reviewer is a professional reviewer. The reviewer's name is Wilfred Okiche and his reviews are published by 360nobs and YNaija. if you check
here, you'll see a small list of albums and films he's reviewed.
Versace1608Wanna Talk?15:38, 2 April 2020 (UTC)reply
I was not citing Wikipedia. I was simply pointing out the number of projects Okiche has reviewed. I am simply saying he is a professional reviewer, not that he meets Wikipedia's notability criteria. YNaija might be a blog but they have an editorial team. They aren't many media platforms in Africa covering music and entertainment-related content. If we had more platforms (like it is in the West), African-related entertainment articles would be lengthy.
Versace1608Wanna Talk?21:46, 2 April 2020 (UTC)reply
According to
this source, his writings have appeared in various print and online publications (I have already mentioned YNaija and 360nobs).
One of the articles he co-wrote appeared in Variety. Sense of Cinema, a reliable website, describes him as "one of the most influential critics working in the Nigerian culture space". Someone who isn't "professional" can't be described in this way. Per
his short bio on their page, Okiche is a member of
FIPRESCI. All of this shows he is a professional critic whose writings have appeared in a number of publications.
Versace1608Wanna Talk?21:32, 2 April 2020 (UTC)reply
The tooXclusive source is good, perhaps a small personnel section with producer, mastering, mixing and that that is on the back cover.
Don't address any concerns until I say so.
@
Versace1608: I understand you might be excited to adress the issues, but I can't be reviwing the article, as I might be going back and forth with you adressing my concerns and you fixing them. Please stepback.
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15:36, 2 April 2020 (UTC)reply
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The source is the same for the first and second sentence, leave it at the end of the second phrase.
"as based largely on research" → can you provide a little more information with what this research is about? Perhaps the "research" was his own words?
I can't provide anymore information about his "research". Brymo did not go into specifics about what kind of research he did; all he said was that the album was based on research. If you think the statement should be omitted, I can do that.
Versace1608Wanna Talk?21:46, 2 April 2020 (UTC)reply
The album's lead single "Heya!" was released on 28 March 2018 → The album's lead single "Heya!" was released on 28 March 2018, along with its music video.
You have duplicate sources as in source 12, 15 and 16 → they are all the same
The album's second single "Bá’núsọ" (Yoruba: "Follow Up") was released on 9 September 2018 → The album's second single "Bá’núsọ" (Yoruba: "Follow Up") was released on 9 September 2018, along with its music video.
360nobs strikes me as a blog, as the writers seem to lack professional background
360nobs is a blog but the reviewer is a professional reviewer. The reviewer's name is Wilfred Okiche and his reviews are published by 360nobs and YNaija. if you check
here, you'll see a small list of albums and films he's reviewed.
Versace1608Wanna Talk?15:38, 2 April 2020 (UTC)reply
I was not citing Wikipedia. I was simply pointing out the number of projects Okiche has reviewed. I am simply saying he is a professional reviewer, not that he meets Wikipedia's notability criteria. YNaija might be a blog but they have an editorial team. They aren't many media platforms in Africa covering music and entertainment-related content. If we had more platforms (like it is in the West), African-related entertainment articles would be lengthy.
Versace1608Wanna Talk?21:46, 2 April 2020 (UTC)reply
According to
this source, his writings have appeared in various print and online publications (I have already mentioned YNaija and 360nobs).
One of the articles he co-wrote appeared in Variety. Sense of Cinema, a reliable website, describes him as "one of the most influential critics working in the Nigerian culture space". Someone who isn't "professional" can't be described in this way. Per
his short bio on their page, Okiche is a member of
FIPRESCI. All of this shows he is a professional critic whose writings have appeared in a number of publications.
Versace1608Wanna Talk?21:32, 2 April 2020 (UTC)reply
The tooXclusive source is good, perhaps a small personnel section with producer, mastering, mixing and that that is on the back cover.
Don't address any concerns until I say so.
@
Versace1608: I understand you might be excited to adress the issues, but I can't be reviwing the article, as I might be going back and forth with you adressing my concerns and you fixing them. Please stepback.
MarioSoulTruthFan (
talk)
15:36, 2 April 2020 (UTC)reply