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It was characterized as electro house while also containing pop influences.This statement sounds more like an opinion, how about ===> "It is an electro house song infused with elements of pop". dxneo ( talk) 18:27, 31 July 2024 (UTC)
The single was reissued in early 2022.===> "Nothing More to Say" was reissued in early 2022". I would suggest that you add precise date like "it was released on 2 May 1994".
dxneo ( talk) 18:27, 31 July 2024 (UTC)
The single contains three tracks. Two of them are versions of "Nothing More to Say": a dub version where DJ Jackmaster was involved and a vocal mix. The other track is "Eeehhh".===> The single is composed of three songs: "Eeehhh" and two versions of "Nothing More to Say", a vocal mix and a dub version with assistance from DJ Jackmaster. dxneo ( talk) 18:27, 31 July 2024 (UTC)
The single was released in January 2013 through Huntleys + Palmers.===> It was released in January 2023 through Huntleys + Palmers. dxneo ( talk) 18:27, 31 July 2024 (UTC)
Its CEO Andrew Thomson said that the single would've been released earlier if "distribution hadn't been as slow".===> The CEO of Huntleys + Palmers, Andrew Thomson said that "Nothing More to Say" would have been released earlier if "distribution hadn't been as slow". dxneo ( talk) 18:27, 31 July 2024 (UTC)
When releasing the single, Sophie said: "I try to make music which is fun to dance to—that should be the loudest voice talking. I think it would be extremely exciting if music could take you on the same sort of high-thrill three-minute ride as a theme park roller coaster."===> Upon the release of" Nothing More to Say", Sophie said that "I try to make music which is fun to dance to—that should be the loudest voice talking. I think it would be extremely exciting if music could take you on the same sort of high-thrill three-minute ride as a theme park roller coaster." dxneo ( talk) 18:27, 31 July 2024 (UTC)
the singleto either "It" or "Nothing More to Say" depending on the context. dxneo ( talk) 19:36, 31 July 2024 (UTC)
Philip Sherburne of Pitchfork described it as "a sparkling take on club pop",===> Writing for Pitchfork, Philip Sherburne described it as "a sparkling take on club pop",
"[p]acked with just the right amount of pop, the formula [is] simple yet undeniable".
According to Apple Music, (Redacted) was the producer on all three songs. dxneo ( talk) 19:36, 31 July 2024 (UTC)
The single was reissued in early 2022.This claim is unreferenced.
Dxneo said "the single was a hit", you turn it to
Writing for en-wiki, Dxneo stated that "Nothing More to Say" was a hit.Get my point? Lastly, please provide a precise release date, just a month and a year. (Redacted) produced all three tracks. dxneo ( talk) 22:52, 31 July 2024 (UTC)
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It was characterized as electro house while also containing pop influences.This statement sounds more like an opinion, how about ===> "It is an electro house song infused with elements of pop". dxneo ( talk) 18:27, 31 July 2024 (UTC)
The single was reissued in early 2022.===> "Nothing More to Say" was reissued in early 2022". I would suggest that you add precise date like "it was released on 2 May 1994".
dxneo ( talk) 18:27, 31 July 2024 (UTC)
The single contains three tracks. Two of them are versions of "Nothing More to Say": a dub version where DJ Jackmaster was involved and a vocal mix. The other track is "Eeehhh".===> The single is composed of three songs: "Eeehhh" and two versions of "Nothing More to Say", a vocal mix and a dub version with assistance from DJ Jackmaster. dxneo ( talk) 18:27, 31 July 2024 (UTC)
The single was released in January 2013 through Huntleys + Palmers.===> It was released in January 2023 through Huntleys + Palmers. dxneo ( talk) 18:27, 31 July 2024 (UTC)
Its CEO Andrew Thomson said that the single would've been released earlier if "distribution hadn't been as slow".===> The CEO of Huntleys + Palmers, Andrew Thomson said that "Nothing More to Say" would have been released earlier if "distribution hadn't been as slow". dxneo ( talk) 18:27, 31 July 2024 (UTC)
When releasing the single, Sophie said: "I try to make music which is fun to dance to—that should be the loudest voice talking. I think it would be extremely exciting if music could take you on the same sort of high-thrill three-minute ride as a theme park roller coaster."===> Upon the release of" Nothing More to Say", Sophie said that "I try to make music which is fun to dance to—that should be the loudest voice talking. I think it would be extremely exciting if music could take you on the same sort of high-thrill three-minute ride as a theme park roller coaster." dxneo ( talk) 18:27, 31 July 2024 (UTC)
the singleto either "It" or "Nothing More to Say" depending on the context. dxneo ( talk) 19:36, 31 July 2024 (UTC)
Philip Sherburne of Pitchfork described it as "a sparkling take on club pop",===> Writing for Pitchfork, Philip Sherburne described it as "a sparkling take on club pop",
"[p]acked with just the right amount of pop, the formula [is] simple yet undeniable".
According to Apple Music, (Redacted) was the producer on all three songs. dxneo ( talk) 19:36, 31 July 2024 (UTC)
The single was reissued in early 2022.This claim is unreferenced.
Dxneo said "the single was a hit", you turn it to
Writing for en-wiki, Dxneo stated that "Nothing More to Say" was a hit.Get my point? Lastly, please provide a precise release date, just a month and a year. (Redacted) produced all three tracks. dxneo ( talk) 22:52, 31 July 2024 (UTC)