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Reviewer: 1ST7 ( talk · contribs) 01:26, 5 November 2013 (UTC) reply

Hey Neelix, I'll review this. Initial comments should be posted in the next twenty-four hours. -- 1ST7 ( talk) 01:26, 5 November 2013 (UTC) reply

Here's the review:

1. Well-written
   • The phrase "many people watching the film bring to it the belief that slavery was abolished a long time ago" sounds a little strange. I think it would be better to just say that "many people believe that slavery was abolished a long time ago".
   • Please explain this phrase a little more: "These girls are pictured in a doorway." Does it mean they are standing in a doorway while they are being filmed? What is the reason for including this detail?
2. Verifiable with no original research:
   • Reference no. 23 is a dead link.
3. Broad in its coverage:
   • The article implies that the third installment to the trilogy has been cancelled. Can you please make this more clear?
4. Neutral:
5. Stable:
6. Illustrated, if possible, by images:

Overall, this article looks close to ready for promotion, and you've done a great job on it (documentaries can be pretty hard to find a sufficient number of sources for). I'll put the article on hold until the things mentioned above are addressed. -- 1ST7 ( talk) 01:31, 6 November 2013 (UTC) reply

Thank you for taking on this review! I have reworded the sentence about the abolishment of slavery, clarified the nature of the scene in which girls appear in a doorway, repaired the link rot, and added a new source to explain the current situation with Bilheimer's plans for his next film. Please let me know if you have any remaining concerns regarding the article. Neelix ( talk) 05:06, 6 November 2013 (UTC) reply

Everything looks good now, so I'm passing the article. Congratulations, and thanks for your work on it! -- 1ST7 ( talk) 05:45, 6 November 2013 (UTC) reply