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Dan O'Connor who would become prominent in areal mining and
prospecting. Does areal mining mean mining an area? Or is it a typo of aerial (except that aerial mining usually means dropping naval mines from aircraft)? Maybe there's a better word for it? –
Reidgreg (
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15:24, 31 October 2018 (UTC)reply
@
Volcanoguy: Looks good; I added two commas and a hyphen. The only problem I see is this sentence: Ultramaficlithologies required to generate high-
pH fluids are not present, suggesting that
chert and
iron oxide deposition was unlikely controlled by pH fluctuations caused by mixing of
alkaline hydrothermal fluids with seawater. It could prove a bit tough for some readers. The adjective unlikely doesn't work well with the verb controlled. You could put "to have been" between these words but it might be better to rephrase, though I don't want to change the intended meaning. (Was it controlled but controlled in an unlikely manner, or are there scientific doubts of a regulating relationship?) Also, could the last part of the sentence be simplified as: "by the pH fluctuations of
alkaline hydrothermal fluids mixing with seawater." –
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01:43, 3 November 2018 (UTC)reply
A fact from Northeast Arm Iron Range appeared on Wikipedia's
Main Page in the Did you know column on 8 December 2017 (
check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
Talk:Northeast Arm Iron Range is part of WikiProject Geology, an attempt at creating a standardized, informative, comprehensive and easy-to-use
geology resource. If you would like to participate, you can choose to edit this article, or visit the
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mining and mineral industries. If you would like to participate, you can edit the attached article, or visit the
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Dan O'Connor who would become prominent in areal mining and
prospecting. Does areal mining mean mining an area? Or is it a typo of aerial (except that aerial mining usually means dropping naval mines from aircraft)? Maybe there's a better word for it? –
Reidgreg (
talk)
15:24, 31 October 2018 (UTC)reply
@
Volcanoguy: Looks good; I added two commas and a hyphen. The only problem I see is this sentence: Ultramaficlithologies required to generate high-
pH fluids are not present, suggesting that
chert and
iron oxide deposition was unlikely controlled by pH fluctuations caused by mixing of
alkaline hydrothermal fluids with seawater. It could prove a bit tough for some readers. The adjective unlikely doesn't work well with the verb controlled. You could put "to have been" between these words but it might be better to rephrase, though I don't want to change the intended meaning. (Was it controlled but controlled in an unlikely manner, or are there scientific doubts of a regulating relationship?) Also, could the last part of the sentence be simplified as: "by the pH fluctuations of
alkaline hydrothermal fluids mixing with seawater." –
Reidgreg (
talk)
01:43, 3 November 2018 (UTC)reply