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...need quite a bit of work; the first sentence fails because it is in the second person, so doesn't accord with the manual of style, and the "never did have any good facilities" doesn't really come across as objective/neutral. waggers ( talk) 12:13, 10 August 2010 (UTC)
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...need quite a bit of work; the first sentence fails because it is in the second person, so doesn't accord with the manual of style, and the "never did have any good facilities" doesn't really come across as objective/neutral. waggers ( talk) 12:13, 10 August 2010 (UTC)